Reviews for Drowning
InkMagic chapter 1 . 10/27/2007
.AWESOME

Kudos!
Rusty-Knives chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
Nicely done. The poem flows nicely, and I'm rather open to the emotional style that it was written in. The metaphors are rather cool, too. All in all, nicely done.

It has a good flow to it, almost like a song. :3
PunkerGurl chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
This is beautiful... i wish i could write poems like this... here's alittle something... Roses are red,Vilotes are blue... i kill myself, just to be with you... i know that was pretty bad... XD
Knack chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
It's a bit too... Rhyme-y for my taste.

It's a feat that it's so long, but... Meh. Not bad, though.
falcored chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
Finally decided to review. Anyway as said before good poem. Maybe you'll get me to write poems one day lol. Love you.
savanah13 chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
GREAT poem kimi! i LOVE it!

~savanah~ :)
Annimaye chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
aw! That is soo emotional! I especially liked the last line: "I drowned in my tears."