Reviews for The Thin Line
Randomadness chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Hey! This was kinda cute... Poor Sirius...I guess... just one thing, I don't want to be rude or anything, but I wasn't quite sure where you wanted to go with the whole thing... Or maybe I didn't read it well enough... But keep writing! I'll read your other stuff. :)
An Aspiring Author chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
very cute! i think you should continue! maybe put an epilogue of sirius' feelings towards lily at her wedding, when she marries james.