Reviews for Hear No Evil
blb1000 chapter 2 . 9/11/2013
I like the way she describes distance in the number of trees and masked her scent in the forest with animal blood.
Wordzilla chapter 25 . 7/23/2013
I am blown away by this amazing story and how you have finished it. I am so satisfied and I just wanted to say : WRITE MORE AWESOME STORIES LIKE THIS ONE!
Wordzilla chapter 19 . 7/23/2013
Wait, WHAT?! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnddddddddd, there you go, shocking me. Again. I mean, I knew that Bella was unlucky, BUT COME ON! Bella's not unlucky, she is CURSED! But I still loved it. Weird. Write more girlfriend.
Wordzilla chapter 12 . 7/23/2013
Oh. OH. Our feelings are getting a little romantical, aren't they? Please don't tell me that they are going to have a described sex scene! Because those give me the chills...
Wordzilla chapter 10 . 7/23/2013
I am so excited for Bella! Hopefully this goes well -_-
MiniNinjaPanda chapter 22 . 7/19/2013
Great story! Loved it! It makes me wanna learn sign language. Loved Bella's "abilities" and how she interacted with each Cullen. Definitely a good read.
Caz1105 chapter 16 . 7/11/2013
Can't believe you are in your junior year of high school. You are a very talented author. I wonder how old you are now as I don't know the age of your year ( diffent in UK ) xxx
crazy dog lady chapter 23 . 7/10/2013
AddieW has some interesting info about the ASL. However, in the last paragraph when she talks about speaking English and signing at the same time being impossible, that is untrue. Trust me. I've known sign language for about 10yrs now because I'm hard of hearing. She also said that you can only follow about 20% of a convo by reading lips. That is also untrue, because thats how I communicate anymore, is by reading lips.
Thanks for writing this story, I absolutely loved it.
ZoeCullen71421 chapter 25 . 6/20/2013
Loved this story your a great writer
Only one thing annoyed me is that the epilogue is kinda a full of in answered questions, how did they get their scars, what happened with james to make him go after them abd get killed, how did they get engaged when I dont recall reading them saying I love you to each other
Any chance you can post a few "deleted scenes" I guess they could be called
RelapseWarrior chapter 18 . 5/20/2013
Your writing is very good, easy to follow, informative and almost comforting, in a way. Your style makes Bellas initial naivete and confusion believable and a joy to read. It's not often I get to bask in the writers style and influence instead of suffering past it, but yours is soft and warm, homely. Even in times of action or stress the story gives off a down to earth, overall welcoming feel, coaxing readers in for more. It's unique and extraordinary all in one and I'm sincerely glad I found this fiction.

Best Wishes

Relapse Warrior
SanguineTaurean chapter 21 . 5/14/2013
Thank goodness Victoria is gone! James will always wonder what happened and that's okay, too.
SanguineTaurean chapter 19 . 5/14/2013
I am so glad Bella finally learned about her past, especially with Edward there with her. Alice can be counted on! James may have been after her just for the inheritance whether or not he was a vampire at that point. But Victoria was/is definitely jealous of Bella because James wanted/wants her.
SanguineTaurean chapter 16 . 5/13/2013
I can't believe Edward is teaching her to talk. That will definitely come in handy at some point.

I bet one of the vampires intruding on the Cullen's baseball game is the one who turned Bella. This will be very interesting!

And you were a junior in high school when you wrote this story? Oh, my! You're so danged talented and your imagination is great! I really hope you continue writing in some capacity. I would love to read your future writings! Honestly!
SanguineTaurean chapter 12 . 5/12/2013
High school girls can be so cruel and then they grow up. Some change, some don't. Either way they can be so horrible. With Bella not remembering her human life and then being alone for so long I felt sorry for her, even more now that she's in school and dealing with the vipers. Growing up at that age is hard without having to deal with those attitudes plus her handicap. I'm just glad she has the support of all the Cullen's.
SanguineTaurean chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
Well, that's cool! Bella and Edward can hear one another only when they are touching. At least she can now communicate which she hasn't been able to do for, at least, 167 years!
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