|Reviews for Boiling Point|
| Fayari chapter 10 . 2/18
Okay, so much, much deeper than I thought. Pleasant surprise, believe me. I'm glad I stuck through more chapters.
| Fayari chapter 2 . 2/18
... I'm sorry, but I just can't take Sakura and Naruto seriously when I saw that they were 15... when I remember what I was like at 15, I want to slap myself. Everything at that age was so... "End of The World" that it makes me gag. I guess heartbreak really isn't so heartbreaking if you've already been through it a few times.
Still, this is a pretty good story though. I love your writing style, and the characterization, if I didn't know their ages, or if they were a bit older, is pretty damn good on its own. Hope to read more from you soon.
| ExplosiveSex chapter 2 . 2/6
Am I suppose to feel for this Naruto? I know you're trying to get the reader all emotional and teary with the angst and drama but all I feel is the need to laugh and shake my head at the pathetic attempt. Poorly developed plot. No plan at all. Like driving down a foggy road at high speeds not caring whether you crash or not. The parts where Sakura are crying almost made me wet myself from laughing so hard. This was too rushed with no premise as to what happened, even though we all know from canon, can't hurt to let us in on specific details. Major OOC from Naruto. This guy, love or not, wouldn't get all emotional and spontaneously transform into a submissive little bitch who would throw away his dream to become Hokage if it meant having a chance with Sakura. Not to mention he would die by her hands and wouldn't give a damn. Yeah. Major OOC.
| ExplosiveSex chapter 1 . 2/6
This naruto is such a little bitch. A poor whipped pathetic annoying masochistic little bitch that would love to get killed by an equally annoying fan girlish skinny ugly ass pink haired harpy bitch. And when the fuck did it ever hail in Konoha? You're changing the landscape now? It's the hidden village in the leaves not hail. Lol check your geography.
| canonOTP chapter 17 . 6/14/2013
I liked it. I will be waiting for anything new from you!
| Cat chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Reading first chapter and wow.
| vincentt chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
this was beautiful.
| 14tetsuya chapter 17 . 7/22/2011
This story is yet it inspired me in a way. It reminded me of alot. Thanks for making it and i hope you have a good life.
| Akniramen chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Aw, full of angst, so sorry for Naruto! And That he exploded like that! Poor Sakura! Poor Naruto! SASUKE YOU BAKA! He is the root of all these problems but I still love him... Beautifully written piece of fanfic that should be cherished.
| Lilamedusa chapter 16 . 4/26/2011
I've read the whole story and all I could do was get annoyed by your author notes. You act all high and mighty as if you were doing the readers a favor by writing this. It' them doing you a favor by reading it, and honestly, your writing does not back up you attitude.
Your characters and the almost non-existent plot are poorly developed. Kabuto in particular is completely plain. You didn't break your head when giving him reason to be the bad one. Hinata and her team's wounds were not really ever explained. Why did they take two months for a two-week mission if Hinata was so cool she could kill all of Kabuto's army?
I'd like to throw a kind word somewhere along the lines, but, honestly, by what I read in your profile, you seem to never bother to, insulting even those who you think are great, so I won't say that you can improve or anything, because is obvious you don't think you need to. You are that great.
| teodark45 chapter 4 . 1/4/2011
ok so i read another chapter, thinking i was to harsh without actually reading it, and i saw a trace of a plot in there, in all those secrets about naruto, very intriguing but not worth it
still just my personal opinion
| teodark45 chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
I never review fictions i don't continue reading after the first 2 or 3 chapters but for this one i had to do it. I've read 3 chapters and there is just no plot in there , i mean nothing , just sad sad sad characters doing -wait for it- nothing, well except for crying around and whining. I would like to know if in later chapters is going to happen something but i just cant keep reading, I'm sorry. As for you're writing , it is great , there's still something missing , i can't figure it out though.-just so you know this is just my personal opinion and i don't want to offend you in any way-
| always-kh chapter 16 . 10/16/2010
i wish there was more to this but this ending suits somehow i guess. what i disliked was the shifts between first and third person especially as i think some were naruto's which really doesn't make sense. anyhow the first person at the end is fine but throughout the chapter it just doesn't work it interrupts too much and doesn't really seem to make sense.
| always-kh chapter 15 . 10/16/2010
nice chapter the past thing is interesting and i'm really not sure how this is going to go i mean one chapter left? that's a whole lot to tie up.
oh and i love naruto's comment at the end of this chapter btw.
| always-kh chapter 10 . 10/16/2010
so much tension wow i really want to get to the next chapter just to figure out what's happening you're very good at pacing the scene changes.