Reviews for Purging the Grail
Reiku Tohno chapter 10 . 12/21/2007
wow, that was totally unexpected...but i liked it...nice one...
mangafreak7793 chapter 10 . 9/16/2007
nice ending " see you at the next Grail war " funny ending too
mangafreak7793 chapter 9 . 9/15/2007
sad chapter
mangafreak7793 chapter 6 . 8/1/2007
short chapter need more
mangafreak7793 chapter 5 . 7/9/2007
it was okay
seirahErinyes chapter 4 . 6/27/2007
Nice chapter, well thx for considering the double quotation... anyways please update soon
seirahErinyes chapter 3 . 6/24/2007
Nice chapter, but can you consider using a double quote "" cause, I have to admit that I confused about what they are saying and who is saying 'what'... well its just a comment... Update soon!

Cisqua
Tribunal chapter 3 . 6/23/2007
Ryan is a nice, cool Servant :) couldn't help but say.

And I hope he uses Enuma Elish against Gilgamesh next. That will so own... :)
seirahErinyes chapter 2 . 6/21/2007
Update soon
xenocanaan chapter 2 . 6/19/2007
This is a good story!
mangafreak7793 chapter 2 . 6/18/2007
nice start to the new chapter keep it up
mangafreak7793 chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
interesting hope this is a shirou x saber fic
ADarkknight chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
Grial Grail issue, fixed.

As for the wish issue, as i said in the PM i sent ya, i went to investigate and wikipedia says that indeed, the fire actually was started by a wish from kirei, so it can grant wishes, so im sticking to that version until proven wrong, lol XD
I Come Anon chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
Yay, F/SN section! You're not alone in this world anymore :-)

Now for the criticism:

Grail is spelled "G-R-A-I-L", not "grial".

Sorry, just couldn't help it- you've misspelled it something like ten times.

Also, the grail never fully materializes during the fourth Holy Grail War. At the climax of the Fate route, when the Grail/Ilya is hanging in the sky in a ring of light, Kotomine says that's the closest to a complete summoning of the Grail yet. So it's impossible for it to grant Kiritsugu a wish.

Dunno how you can work around that but I'm sure you can find a way.

And I think FSN anime is copyright GENEON. But I might be mistaken, it's been a while since I watched it.

That aside, this review can come full circle: Yay F/SN section! Yay more F/SN fics to read!

:3