|Reviews for Closer to Fine|
| Mara-DragonMaster chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
This was a very good story. A great insight to some of Daniel's thought processes during his 'reintegration' after returning from the dead.
Well done! I enjoyed it a lot!
| amberfly chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Hello, Rat. Great story, liked the way your wrote your characters, faithful and believable. Well done. Amber
| Thraesja chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
This was beautiful. You captured the confusion and frustration Daniel must have felt as his memories returned very nicely, as well as Jack's patient irritation and Daniel's gradual realization. I loved the part where Jack's offer of beer brought the Shades of Grey flash. Getting emotions like that without context must be unsettling in the extreme. Well done.
| starjems88 chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
| 17629578269 chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
i like this one. always wondere how it would feel like, coming back from ascencion and not remembering anything. anyways, nicely done!
| otherhawk chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
This is really sweet. I love Daniel trying not to overanalyse things - not something that comes easily to him. You've got a really good handle on thier voices.