|Reviews for Temporal Twilight|
| Devilgirl4 chapter 20 . 3/2
I really wish you continued the story. Its so good.
| Claywind chapter 20 . 2/11
Oh, I can't wait for Toga trying to gain back his place into his own bed... That'd give one heck of a funny conversation.
And Chuunin is going to be so confused when he's told about the fact that Kagome knows the future, but a future that has been and that is no more, so basically, an outdated future... (that was weird to say)
And did I mention how cute little Sesshy was ? Terribly, adorably, freakingly, terrifyingly cute
I really like the story: please, write the next chapter, cause I want to know the end, I require the end!
I need it!
| Claywind chapter 18 . 2/11
This is so well done I almost cried at Kirara's death... had completely forgotten the Tenseiga
| Claywind chapter 15 . 2/10
The level of cuteness... is over 9000 !
(sorry for the poor reference, but the cuteness just destroyed most of my grey matter... so my brain couldn't offer a better one)
| Claywind chapter 13 . 2/10
I don't see why this chapter should be hated : it is very good.
Maybe it was a tremendous pain in the ass to write... and that's why you hated it.
As a reader, I enjoyed the heck out of it
| Claywind chapter 10 . 2/10
Holy Hell ! This is awesome !
I just love the interactions between Toga, Sesshomaru and Kagome (it feels so weird to picture Sess as an uncertain youth)
| Claywind chapter 8 . 2/10
You put Sesshomaru on a leash.
You freaking put the great magnificent Lord Sesshomaru on a leash.
And I love you for that
| Claywind chapter 7 . 2/9
Did he just... kill her ?
Snapped her neck ?
I am very confused
And very enthusiast
| Claywind chapter 5 . 2/9
Rhaaaaa! So much questions I have... So much answers hinted...
So much desire to go read the next chapter
And that's exactly what will be done
| Claywind chapter 4 . 2/9
You're right. InuPapa rocks.
And I really dread to find out that the flow of time itself has been perturbated and that Sesshomaru and Inuyasha aren't born
| Claywind chapter 3 . 2/9
It is truly great. I simply adore this story. I have been really wondering if Kagome was truly insane... but now I'm thinking that, though it could, she is not.
There's something in the way her "madness" is depicted that gives me this impression
That and the fact that she indeed followed Dr. Taisho, using abilities that a normal human couldn't...
Which proves almost everything about youkai truly existing in this world
| Claywind chapter 1 . 2/9
Oh it begins so well...
Toga is playing a really mean game... and I wonder why
Does it mean that Sess and Inu aren't even born ? That's so sad and twisted...
| Mage-Yewoqirife chapter 20 . 12/10/2013
Just leaving a review filled with sorrow that this story is unfinished. And I have now officially read everything you have posted :)
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2013
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| Colette Hyuga chapter 20 . 10/11/2013
Totally loved this story. Touga is quote the interesting character. Now that kagome and he came to a sort of understanding, i wonder wjat will happen next?