Reviews for The Scorched Earth Promise
Guest chapter 6 . 5/12
This is really cute! I hope you can still update
tomboy 26 chapter 6 . 2/2/2012
This was actually prettey interesting .. too bad it hasn't been updated .. sigh
scott has a pole up his ass chapter 6 . 9/5/2010
Liketh the story update it soon, no really update it...now
IRapeLlamas chapter 5 . 8/8/2010
looks like zuko bargained for a slumber party not a questioning session bahahaha ;o
IRapeLlamas chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
i like how unique the idea is. i guess. ive never seen another one like this. except for all those zutaras.

ech.

who needs em?
IRapeLlamas chapter 3 . 8/8/2010
i really love this - i ran out of things to say for reviews...
IRapeLlamas chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
ha wow this is really good!
Lucyole chapter 6 . 8/2/2010
i love it is very good wow Zuko beginns tolike her

and is nice , and toph is very cool I'm pleased to read the next chapter
Cap'n Green chapter 5 . 7/18/2010
Wow, this is a great story. It's a shame it takes so long to review. But that's alright. Like you said, if you don't update for a while I'll just leave some messages. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Ouji Saiyaku
avatar chapter 5 . 7/17/2010
guess i'm the first one in almost 2 years but good andup date
Waiyi chapter 4 . 12/30/2008
please make it longer )
xXDreamlessOrNightmaresXx chapter 4 . 7/27/2008
anou...its cute
PrncsAelita chapter 4 . 5/24/2008
Very good. Can't wait for more! :)
Mrs. Aang chapter 4 . 1/25/2008
Keep going! Love toko fics.
Winged Cherry chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
Being honest; I didn't even read the whole chapter.

English is my second language and all the spelling mistakes are really confusing for me.

Like:

...head with it to hard. ('To' should be written with dubble 'o'.)

...packing there camping equipment on to Apaa. (It's not 'there' but 'their'. You also spelled Appa wrong in this sentence.)

“Where you going?” (It should be "Where ARE you going?")

I think you could have prevented a lot of spelling errors by just reading the story through while watching the spelling.

Small mistakes can annoy the heck out of some people.

I like the story idea through, just watch your spelling.

Good luck!

GhostCookie
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