Reviews for Desire
Amethystaura chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
I loved it!
Grinsekatze chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
og, god, i almost wept. this was awesome. and it all makes sense. thank you for this. i am sorry but i can't really comment cause i'm not skilled enough in this language.
ClosetedDork chapter 2 . 5/3/2010
*Mouth hangs open*
*Favorites*
This is amazing! Sad, fantastic writing, everything perfect about it.
Black Lighted Clouds chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Whoa, this must've taken ages to do! It's very wel done! Though I got a bit confused as it didn't hint who it was at the start so I just assumed it was Light . . .

Oh well, it's still awesome, even if a little depressing.
Exrahlixxibith chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
that was sad, but so good...
HeadacheWoman chapter 2 . 4/28/2008
T_T ahh!it is so great!poems are very beautiful,but I am crying at the time I read L!it is so sad..T_T
Musette The Vampire chapter 2 . 3/7/2008
your poems were both awesome.i loved Light' made me want to beautiful.
LauraChristianne chapter 2 . 2/10/2008
You are a good poet.
Fang500 chapter 2 . 12/19/2007
You are a really good poet...I like these two poems you wrote about Light and Ryuzaki...Hope you write more...
black.is.the.new.blood chapter 2 . 11/26/2007
Wow...this is amazing! It's sweet, sexy, and so sad! You are brilliant for writing this! It is so lovely!
Pehico chapter 2 . 10/14/2007
So tragic. This was really good poetry, all the rhymes and everything... You well comprehended the emotions between those two antagonists.
Pehico chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
That was really a beautiful poem. Really graphic sometimes, indeed... Though I enjoyed it. The emotions drawn in the words were strong, I could feel them. The way you write... I must thank you for the feeling you gave to me.
red-feathers-pink-blossom chapter 2 . 8/22/2007
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that was amazing.

the first time i've nearly nearly nearly been moved to tears by a poem. this was just perfect, the expressions used and the rythm particularly.

keep on writing poems. they sure are something else!
Catch The Ghost chapter 1 . 7/15/2007
That was so awsome, but so sad for L. T_T
Till death due us part chapter 2 . 7/14/2007
...Those are the best poems I've ever read in my entire life. Simply amazing. I could never write something like that, nonethless rhyming and a story to boot like that. I especially liked Raito's view afterwards, his character was very IC. And so was L. Bravo. o.o Bravo.
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