Reviews for Better
iphis18 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Nicely angry.

~Mademise Morte
Vaughn Tyler chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
Azul Tigress chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
I enjoyed this - it’s refreshing to see things from Magenta’s POV for a change and this is a good, angsty little piece. You capture Magenta’s general feeling of uselessness and bitterness with her lot very well.

Nice work!
Tinuel chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
I liked it! .

I always enjoy reading about characters and their feelings with powers.

I kinda felt the whole dieing part was kinda random and off the topic, but it was nicely written. But I dont think it influenced the story much :-p It just happened to be the biggest chunk.

What was important was what we heard at the end. She wants to be a hero, and Boomer won't let her.., which was a good point to make _

- Tinuel
Abuhin chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
This was cool. I liked the angsty attitude you portrayed for Magenta.