|Reviews for The night before battle|
| DarkPalutena023 chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
Oh and a small grammar issue. Sheen of sweat is grammatically incorrect. Sheen is an adjective, so the of was unnecessary. Other than that the fic was extremely good.
| Elly3981 chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
So romantic and sexy! Please write more! ;)
| L chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
| Sonye-San chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
Me gusto *-*
| Angry Santo chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Damn...heartwarming and awesome.
| HopelessRomanticist chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Incredibly sweet and wonderful. Helps that it's about my second favourite pairing of all time (just after Shinji/Asuka from NGE).
Oh, and if anyone want to know, those last words are from the FSN anime's opening theme (disillusion). They mean approximately:
"To live for the sake of someone, wouldn’t it be nice if we let this moment count for everything?"
*sniff*. Goddamn bittersweet ending. At least the Realta Nua patch gets them together in the afterlife...
| The Messiahs False Smile chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
One of the best I've read, almost perfect but for two things. It was too short, but I've written two stories shorter than that so I can't really complain on that point. The other is the ending, from the start until most of thw way through it was brilliant, but then it was like your writing style changed, or you grew tired or something, because the ending wasn't as good. I liked the emotional part of it, I hate fics that only concentrate on sex withouh emotion, but this captured both of the characters perfectly. There was a lot of description, perhaps too much but I like fics like that anyway. I'm definately favouriting this, and I'm going to read your other fics _
| moomoomoores chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
loved it loved it loved it though i would like to know what the bit at the end means
| Mike Kromer chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Now that was somthing, good work
| ShadowFlame1 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
To be perfectly honest, this is one of those fanfictions (even oneshots) to which I love to come back from time to time. In my opinion the pair of Shirou and Saber is the most romantic one, if the only one romantic at all. Not the "I don't dislike you too" ShirouxRin or "Tell me what I wanna hear" ShirouxSakura. I love the style of this fanfic, all subtle and not too fast. I wouldn't say that any of them were out of character. Shirou knew how much he loved her and wanted to show her that, but he didn't take her forcefully and that's a major plus. Saber was always reserved and shy in discovering new things, not pretty much connected with swordsmanship or chivalry but especially connected with discovering her own person as a woman she had hidden from the world. I'd like to express my gratitude for the author. Thanks :)
| samurai89 chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
That was well written, good job!
| SakuraLuvCharm chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
Wait a moment what game?
| Ms. Chidori Sagara chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Very nice and good. You captured Saber's attitude very well. But I think Shirou is a little.. OOC? But never mind me I liked this.
About that thing before Berserker. I never thought that it was implied that they had sex in that ep. But Rin did say, physical contact, so I guess yeah. I wasn't just thinking too much about it oh well.
I like this! *favourited* D
| obnoxious.ovaries chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
Wahh dont listen to 'saber' it was godd ;)
plus its like the only lemon you can finf under fate / stay night. I owe you for that O
| Desert Mammoth chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
I liked it, what a nice change from the other writers who try too hard to make their lemons too "sexy" which in turn makes it sound more like a script from some cheap porn movie, But those writers should keep on writing and improving so they can produce better fics (hope I didn't offend anyone, sorry)
This goes to reviewer "Saber" you need to understand that not all lemons are more then 3,0 words of sex from the start of the story to the end, but if thats all your interested in and don't give a damn about the story and just want to get to the "juicy" bits then please go to and stop flaming people whose fics have more to them then sex, lemons, and more sex.