|Reviews for Neo|
| SuperKamiGuru.Jr chapter 2 . 9/28/2013
This is gonna be a very good story and does this take place after :MAY I USE YOU?"
| Young IV chapter 13 . 7/4/2013
You should write about Neo's past and What happened to his sisters?
| Young IV chapter 2 . 7/4/2013
| HonorableSamurai8 chapter 25 . 8/4/2012
Hello,I'm new here.I've been reading your stories such as neo,odd affection,a different gohan and some of the stories you deleted for a long time before I made an account here.I was wondering if you can make another version of the story neo where neo made a deal with vegeta(cell game saga)of helping vegeta ascend ssj2 and ssj3,you don't have to do it
| Panther-Strife chapter 25 . 10/28/2011
You should give Neo 3 female saiyans...that way he could restore the saiyan race.
| RockNation chapter 25 . 5/19/2011
you should make a sequel where Neo returns to the timeline where he learned SSJ 4 transformation to live his life out with all his family and friends ? maybe that might be an interesting story and with your talent I'm sure you can make it happen !
| hieimasteroflight chapter 25 . 3/12/2011
This stories with Neo rocked.
The wa you portrayed the characters was amazing too.
good luck with your other stories.
| xWei chapter 25 . 4/24/2010
! its fantastic! couldnt stop reading
T_T just sad that 18 died but guess its better gohan and 18 hook up in anotehr world XD\
though at times i get confused cause of the different universes but i guess tahts just my the rest of your work
| G. Login chapter 22 . 11/19/2009
I am not actually married but that does make sense. Also possibly later in life when looking back on this Pan and/or Marron would wonder would their mom/dad have been happier with a so like Neo rather then them.
| ForeverBlue90 chapter 25 . 11/19/2009
Woot! There we go! An amazing story! Btw... what happened to your reviews? i could have sworn they dropped since 1st chapter... S I loved it! i mean i know its Neo centered and i dont usually like OCs but this one was 18's son so i HAD to read it P Better than shitty Marron... thats for sure.
I loved it! great story! Now right an epically creative story centering around 18 and make the ultimate fighter! D lol... just wishing!
AGain, fantastic job! keep it up!
| spriterx chapter 22 . 11/11/2009
Great story. Update soon:)
| spriterx chapter 21 . 11/10/2009
Great chapter. Keep it up:)
| mfmxxx chapter 21 . 11/9/2009
From what's shown it looks like there is no chance of Gohan x Eighteen in this in the main timeline except maybe a few moments between them? :)
| MusixAkira948 chapter 21 . 11/9/2009
i really enjoyed the story, its really the next chapter as soon as possible please cause im too axited to wait!hehe
| ForeverBlue90 chapter 21 . 11/9/2009
Woohoo! And next chapter we get down and dirty! Woot! Aw couldn't you have made eighteen sound better? She is above Average human and you could say that... her genes were somewhat altered by Gero to allow her body to maintain higher levels of energy whilst regenerating. Which would make sense since 18's skin and human parts dont burn off when she fights. P
You dont have to take me seriously though... just a fan with an idea. )
I am loving your fic as usual! Update soon! I am loving it!