Reviews for Neo
Guest chapter 20 . 12/2/2014
EXcellent story,even if Idon't know who those Neo and glorft are,and,the most interesting point:how can an android become a mother?and of two different children,from two different men?
I always had Android 18th like a faithful being,always dedicated to her beloved family,Krilin and Maroon...Well,it is your view,and,as an alternate story,it would be fine,if not due to the unloyalties you are depicting here,Also,it is very well known that Tapion and Trunks alwyas felt attracted one to would have been a ood opportunity for a very interesrting yaoi!
MewLover chapter 25 . 10/8/2014
I absolutely loved it
MewLover chapter 24 . 10/8/2014
Great job
MewLover chapter 23 . 10/8/2014
This was really epic!
MewLover chapter 21 . 10/8/2014
This was a great way to speed things up
MewLover chapter 20 . 10/8/2014
This was an awesome chapter! I enjoyed it! The Z-fighters whooped that bitch's ass!
Great job
MewLover chapter 19 . 10/8/2014
This was an intriguing chapter
MewLover chapter 18 . 10/7/2014
Terrific chapter; I wonder would Broly make an appearance?
MewLover chapter 17 . 10/7/2014
This was pretty cool
MewLover chapter 16 . 10/7/2014
Amazing job here; I loved the little bit of mystery
MewLover chapter 15 . 10/7/2014
Nice build-up you've got here
MewLover chapter 14 . 10/7/2014
This was fantastic
MewLover chapter 13 . 10/7/2014
Piccolo's reaction seems very reasonable; Piccolo's still wary of the Saiyan.
The thoughts on the flashback: Thanks for the insight into Neo's past it helps us sympathize even more with his character.
The interactions with Marron and Eighteen: they were really cool to read about.
He loved Marron even though she had a different dad; he still loves his mom, that says a lot.
Neo's character is quite intriguing.
MewLover chapter 12 . 10/7/2014
This was an excellent chapter; I loved the match between Piccolo and Neo
MewLover chapter 11 . 10/7/2014
Nice job putting the pieces together here; it's making for a good read
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