|Reviews for The Ins and Outs of Life|
| riverofserenity chapter 9 . 3/27/2012
you should do a sequel but not journal like with the three of them and a kid
| charlie-becks chapter 9 . 1/25/2009
this was a really strange but well written story, i loved the greg an nick chapter it was hilarious :D i jus thought id let u know i loved it :D
| Giwu chapter 9 . 6/17/2007
I think you did a fantastic job of capturing all of their voices and their personalities. The sex you wrote was very well done (more please).
The anti-Sara comments don't fit in with the rest of the story. I think you are a good enough writer to write a story without taking a swipe at her or any of the team. Ecklie makes the perfect bad guy.