Reviews for Aphrodisiac
curriejean chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
"his two fingers entered Roxas' cock"

I bet he felt 'a sensation.' This needs more than a beta. This needs to be written in your first language.

Um, unless two-finger sounding is your thing?
The Stars Above Your Head chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Lolz! That was good! I liked it!
Electra Raven chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
That was sweet! haha, loved axel and his smexyness.
lady taylor chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
ha ha

this is so like axel

i can't believe Zexion is the one to drug him

i guess i understand his reasons

sex scene to short!

more...please?
Reifa chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
Your grammar is atrocious. Do you still need a beta reader?

I'd be happy to edit your fics for you. :D
carlicatastrophe chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
Ha! That was cute!
Polish chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
See this is why you dont put down your drink anywhere, or leave it unattended just in case some sick freak thinks its a good idea. Your story is a good warning to people everywhere if you think your drink has been tampered with, then that usually means that it was. I feel for you, Im glad your ok.
X-Sparker chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
That is from a true story? HOLY SHIT!

and yes the sex scene was way too short!

and yes your story didn't make sense at some point,

and yes I can be your beta if you don't mind,

and yes I'm sorry for so many 'yes'-es!
carolina tears chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
I gotta be honest here. This is a great story, with a great idea and all, but you REALLY need a beta or something. I understand that grammer may not be your specialty, and this is just friendly advice. Please don't take it offensively.

I really love the plot though. and I absolutely ADORE the ending as well.

Thank you and I would love to see more of your work!
Izayoi Aki SDG chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
This is one of the funniest Yaoi fics I have ever read!

~hexheart~