Reviews for Almost Honest
tibbslash chapter 2 . 1/13/2014
Oh God...too emotional to continue to chapter 3. Need time to pull it together!
This story is absolutely amazing. You deserve many more kudos and reviews then
have been shown you so far. I will comment again when I continue. The last reviewer was
spot on. You are truly gifted and I do hope you have found success as a writer out of the FF world.
Jake Caldefore chapter 16 . 4/15/2010
Oh dear.

I've stumbled on this jewel at least 5 times now, but I could never bring myself to read anything past the second chapter. The whole idea... This is just awesome. Not the "hey dude, that's awesome" awesome, but the kind that's filled with a sort of power and energy that's just unfathomable. There aren't any words here to write about how I feel about this piece, or how this piece is in general. It's so raw, captivating, and just so full of emotion that I had to take several breaks in between just to finish reading it. Throughout the whole story, I was always hoping that Tony would come back, because I could hear his voice so well in my mind. The whole plot, the structure, the timeline... it was amazingly well-organized and extremely well-written. I'm amazed that there aren't very many reviews for this piece. I'm still sitting here baffled by the feeling of this little story.

Keep writing,

Jake
Saiyura chapter 16 . 4/5/2010
This is one of the few, one of the only stories, I have ever cried while reading. I am a cold-hearted demented person with the lack of hospitality when I find it relevant to be one. I always ready Tragedy, Horror, Mystery, and any other gut wrenching, character death, etc... and not once ha ve I cried to any of them, but this story! I have nothing to say.

I find it hard that you were doing this story for a Saw crap, my favorite horror/humor movie, I really find those movies humorous, and this...

If you ever become a top notch writer or anything like that I think I'll be your fan for life! I'm already a fan of this story. Thank you for doing your best, even though the chapters are short they make a point that really no longer story could make, and I hope to see more stories like that.

Sai kun - with great admiration.
Nodaybuttoday95 chapter 7 . 6/3/2009
Hey just wanted to tell you, your writing's amazing.
DarkRose2006 chapter 7 . 5/3/2009
Wow, great story! I love it! I like the angst...it's a very unique story. I do wish to hear more about what's happening to Tony rather than just through his recordings...I do love torture...and of NCIS...Tony's my favorite Torturee...just a thought, but whatever you do, please update soon! I want to hear more!
crokettsgirl chapter 16 . 4/28/2009
Wow is that the ending? not to seem dump, but it could be with a great ending of the words Tony had recorded, or it could go on the way it was.

Fornell did die and the ones that were the cause of all this did too. Ok you had me misty eyed at the thought of Tony's funeral and his words in so many tapes. I figure Gibbs since he's thinking of what Tony said will have a copy to hear over the years as will Tim and maybe Abby and Ducky. Such a sad story but it was very well written...excellent job...no more? Well as I said if no more than Tony's words finished it well...again, brilliant job. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 15 . 4/28/2009
McGee was right and now hopefully Fornell will still be alive as Jenny. They did good in the gun fight, but poor Cynthia, Ziva and Tony are left in death but Tony's words ring on in Tim's mind as he listened over and over to what Tony had said in those tapes and I like how you use them in this chapter and last to help Tim see things he hadn't before. Well done, enjoyed the action and hope That this will free Gibbs. I can't wait to see what happens though I'm still so sad that Ziva had to die and that Tony did all but his words and what he taught Tim and others with his life...Great job. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 14 . 4/28/2009
Poor Tim he has this all on his shoulders and it's freaking him out. But I think Ducky helped him with his visit and now Tim has something and I can't wait to read what it is. So glad to see 3 updates! Great job. Sue
sentarla chapter 16 . 4/28/2009
wow, that must have been hard to write. I know it was hard to read. I love tony. He is the show along with gibbs. When I first started reading this story, the first chapter and I figured that tony was dead I had to argue wih myself about reading any more. I did not want to, because I did not want to think about tony dead, but it was so well writen that I needed to know what tony had said. I felt that I had to. So I kept reading. Thank you for a wonderful story. I loved th bitter sweet ending.
crokettsgirl chapter 13 . 3/26/2009
I think that one FBI agent is involved. Tony did say one sounded German and one Turkish or Middle East. I'm glad that Ducky said what he did to that guy, I don't trust him at all. I am sad that Tony and Ziva are dead. But with all that is happening to Tony and towards the end his mind would be wandering yet he is saying something about who had him. That's how they found him through the tapes, now they have to find the people and the big wig behind it. And I hope Fornell isn't behind it, but again I don't trust this one guy, don't know about the others. I can't wait to see who they are and the plan and why they gave Tony the tapes and sent them to NCIS. need another chapter...great job, Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 12 . 3/26/2009
Again I love how they think and as they are coming up with things, it's like Tony is answering or telling them about their questions. And I guess it's hard for Gibbs after Kate to think of Tony and has to call him the victim. I'm glad they are trying to get him to see and the call to Fornell. I hope Fornell can help with this . Also glad that McGee figured out what Tony was saying in his state of mind. Excellent! Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 10 . 3/18/2009
Oh this was so sad. but the way you have Gibbs thinking and then the tape coming back like Tony's answering it great. Gibbs is so lost now. And i want to know what this case was that started all this. And if they, the IA will leave Gibbs alone. And about Kay and Asher...again you did a fantastic job here. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 9 . 3/18/2009
Wow I wonder what case it is that Tony's giving clues about and why Gibbs is being looked at as the murder. And now Tony admits a secret about his son who is around one now. That look between McGee and Gibbs is it to find Kay and Asher? They need to know about Tony and why they haven't seen him and that he is now dead...oh that is so sad...Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 8 . 3/18/2009
Oh it makes me so sad that Tony died and now they know he's been dead a long time. And I wonder in Tony's tape what he is planning to do that he wants Gibbs to understand...fantastic job. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 7 . 3/18/2009
Gibbs being hard on himself is so Gibbs. I'm glad that Abby is there to talk to him. Tony has separated himself from the world, from himself to a point and maybe some of reality. So sad and you are writing this so well that is brings tears to my eyes. sue
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