Reviews for Immortal
harinezumiko chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Another tour de force!
FrostyFeline chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
*sniff* so sad...TT This. Fic. Really. Awesome. I need to go cry now...T.T
Key and WolfStar-SCA chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
"The sensation of invisible eyes on him made his teeth crawl."

Teeth... crawl?

other than that, I love all your stories. It's just that one line struck me as odd and I thought it may have been a typo.
Rinn Harridan chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Wow...I don't know what to say other than that. This was a really amazing fic. You write so well. Please write more!
Anime's Echo chapter 1 . 8/25/2007
Aww... the ending was so sad. Great fic. I don't know what else to say. *adds to favs*
PseudoSoapScribe chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
This was so beautifully written, it almost brought tears to my eyes. It's so unique. My words can't praise you and this story enough.
viper chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
oh..im so happy! yeah...this story is so well written..and smart...i get tired of reading stories that have no substance and are jsut written on the fly..anyway..why belley ache about it here, in a review..i just want ot say that it was great...and to make it even better..u left ryo the way he was..cus i think he's the character that gets the msot distorted...anyway...kudos 4 a great story!
Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
One words: ... WOW!
Higuchimon chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
Aw! Well, Juudai will come fix things up sooner or later. ;) Until then, it was really good to see a glimpse into the past. Poor...everyone!