|Reviews for The Flash|
| Daniel chapter 4 . 1/31
I have my own KP/Flash crossover. Ron, too, gets the powers of the Flash. But is inspired by the 90's Flash series.
| Belrevan chapter 4 . 12/29/2008
very good story
| theotherdave chapter 4 . 3/20/2008
Writers block and a school free period is understandable. You can always Youtube some classic Flash to get the creative juices flowing
| Mystic Girl567 chapter 4 . 1/29/2008
Don't worry about the writers block. I'm having the same problem with one of my stories. Just please, please, PLEASE update soon.
| Mortal Guardian chapter 3 . 12/11/2007
After reading how Ron ordered so much that BN had to close until they could get more food in stock, I hope that in order to pay for it all he's saved up much from his Smarty Mart job or has some money left over from his millionaire days (Drakken did get away with 'all of it,' but I'm sure Ron ended up returning some of his bling as well as that gold-plated limo).
| SithKnight-Galen chapter 4 . 12/1/2007
that as a a cute clue...can't wait for it...guess I should begin to do as the word says to get the chapter here quicker, huh?
| The J.A.M. a.k.a. Numbuh i chapter 4 . 11/30/2007
I'm not too well versed in the Flash (or that much on KP either, as I was dragged into the fandom by a friend), but this might help:
KP would take Ron to the hospital, and get him on a scale. She'd note his weight, and then get an insane amount of food of the same weight. Then she'd note the reading while Ron is holding food in his hand, and again after he eats it. If the reading remains the same, then Ron would know that something is wrong.
They might also get a nutriologist to note how much the average stomach and intestine can hold.
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| Miguel Dubn chapter 4 . 11/30/2007
The chapter's title is "Accelerate", although you Had two l's in bold instead of only one, like you did almost at the end when you got it right.
Don't worry about the delay, KE. We all know how difficult it can be to deal with writers block so take your time. Don't rush it and you'll manage to deliver a great update.
Best of wishes. :)
| He Who Hides In Plain Sight chapter 4 . 11/30/2007
The title is "Accelerate"! HAHA, that was EASY!
| Halfbl00dA1chemist chapter 3 . 10/3/2007
Hey! great story so far! Let me know when the next installment comes out. I really wanna see what happens next. THANKS!
Your humble fan/servant,
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 3 . 9/28/2007
The Ron-man is already an eating machine... now he'll be a major DEVOURING one.
Nice chapter. One thing; try separating each character's dialogues on different paragraphs. It's easier to read.
Keep the good writing.
| Miguel Dubn chapter 3 . 9/28/2007
I forgot to say that you should separate the dialogues from the description of the action going on. Including them in a paragraph makes it really hard to keep track of what's being said by the characters.
Aside from that, everything's just great.
| Miguel Dubn chapter 3 . 9/28/2007
Glad to see you've updated this story. We fans are waiting anxiously to see what you have in store for the Ronster.
I think the Stoppables will need to hit the jackpot or inherit some big fortune if Ron keeps eating as he has because they don't have the right amount of money necessary to feed their son. Let's hope Ron's royalties checks start coming in with at least six figures on them, otherwise he and his family will be homeless in no time.
But hey, maybe they can find a way to control his hunger. And they're gonna be majorly surprised when they know what the accident did to Ron! Better get the tights ready, Ron-man!
| SithKnight-Galen chapter 3 . 9/28/2007
Hmm, an interesting re-telling of the Flash origin, and oddly enough, I can actually see Ron as being the Flash, too. It is interesting to see that his transformation is actually taking part in steps instead of him just instantly having the powers of the Speed Force.
| BlackStar-F chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Kim and Ron are neighbors :p proved at the begining of " Larry's birthday episode