Reviews for Surprise!
ohmyfuckingod chapter 44 . 11/26/2012
that was such a good story you are an awsome writer! keep writing girl!
AkitoTsubaki chapter 12 . 6/8/2008
Oh, also...

Rape is a horrifying experience that causes severe psychological trauma. Victims experience shock, denial, paranoia, and severe (often suicidal) depression. Rape is not 'yummy' or 'sexy', nor is it enjoyable for the victim or something experienced and recovered from twenty minutes later.

Cain recovered from those incidents with Michael WAY too quickly and with far too little damage, which makes the whole thing read as though you don't take the concept of rape seriously. It is a VERY serious matter and should never be taken lightly.
AkitoTsubaki chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
Just going to point out...there were prostitutes in the nineteenth century, and pimps too. Cain would know what a pimp is; he is not that naive. *sweatdrop*
Joybug chapter 44 . 11/12/2007
I love it!

Joybug chapter 43 . 11/1/2007
Yay! Cain lives! Someone should moleste him now! LOL!
Joybug chapter 42 . 10/20/2007
Uh oh! Here comes Dug!

Run Cain! that guy's a toucher!

Joybug chapter 41 . 10/15/2007
Michael shouldn't die. I kind of like him now that he's realized he was a jerk.


yay Cain and Riff goodness!

Monkey needs more!
Joybug chapter 40 . 10/3/2007
Well, I was going to say poor Riff, but then he got not so poor!



Joybug chapter 39 . 8/29/2007
Poor Jo! Who's Dug going to play with now? :(

Michael missed his chance again! Darn!


I likes!
WhimsicallyUnfortunate chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
:3 i LOVE itt! :3

cain 21st century trouble. *nodds*
Joybug chapter 38 . 8/17/2007
Aw, I knew Michael could do it! Heh!

I love it

'You should've woken up if you wanted to know'

Joybug chapter 37 . 8/12/2007
you tease!


awesome story,

poor little Cain just can't seem to keep out of trouble now can he?

I guess that's why he always had Riff around.


Keep it up!
Joybug chapter 36 . 8/11/2007

I'm so excited!

Cain and Michael sitting in a car, are they naked..what do you mean they're not?


I wanna know about Jonathan now.

Pretty please?

Joybug chapter 35 . 8/8/2007
the translations aren't bad, don't worry. :)


at first I thought Cain had done something weird to accidentally blow up the house.


Joybug chapter 34 . 8/5/2007
hehe! I hope that Jo gets his fun playing session(FPS)! Yay!

Cain should get one too!

FPS all around for all the prettyboys!

Why should michael hog them all to himself? LOL
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