|Reviews for Nightmares|
| Damaia chapter 1 . 1/13/2003
hmmm... the story is there, but the description of people, surroundings, etc is not. by the way, please read my story, rendezvous point
| Tathrin chapter 1 . 6/3/2002
heh. That was pretty good. I think you should add another chapter-maybe starting with Jack beginning to lay back down when teh door blows in or something...That would be rather ironic. Grammar and sentence struscture are a bit primitive, and the story seems rushed, but the plot has some great potential to it.
| jon chapter 1 . 2/7/2002
that was good
| Mirai Trunks chapter 1 . 7/18/2001
weird, also hard to understand...
| Miba chapter 1 . 7/18/2001
Yep. It's a great story. ROTFL!