|Reviews for Cursed Death|
| Orion Khan chapter 14 . 8/14/2015
Rather enjoyed this and was disappointed to see no updates since 2009 so went to see your other stories. Was delighted to see your other tayuya fic was updated earlier this year and sincerely hope this one gets an update. Will read the other fic in the meantime I expect I'll enjoy it immensely
| WingSlash chapter 14 . 2/26/2014
Considering the last time that this story was updated was around four years ago in 2009, I think it's safe to say that you have no interest in continuing this story or, you're probably stuck with real world problems and whatnot.
Personally, I'm disappointed that this story will not be continued because I am genuinely surprised that you were able to take a one-dimensional villain and actually make a fairly compelling character out of her.
However, if you won't continue writing this story, then that's fine, we all have our lives to live, but if you ever decide to return to this story, I will be there to read and enjoy it, and share my full thoughts on it as a whole.
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/22/2013
This was a nice chapter like the rest of them. will u continue to create more?
| SanShine chapter 14 . 3/10/2013
100th Review. It is a good fic and funny to read. Too bad it seems it was the end of it ;)
| Msmusicful chapter 14 . 2/5/2013
I love story soo soo bad plz update soon ive kinda been waiting for a year
| F.M.L-Dopple chapter 14 . 10/26/2012
looking forward to the next chapter and i'm pleased this has a plot and a story and as tayuya is a favourite of mine i'm happy this isn't just some porno Like i judged when i looked at the "cover" the story is nice and i'm enjoying it please keep up the good work
(i judged it not to be one via the cover in case of missunderstanding)
| shikatayu chapter 14 . 6/12/2009
You been working hard see. It's been a while...
I love how Shikamaru and Tayuya is always talking to each other on things or about each other! Even though, they do it in their own way.
Oh, and I also readed the other one,"Never Given A Choice", the the new chapter very good too! -
| Haraio chapter 14 . 6/1/2009
Wow, very exciting. Now I can't wait to see what will happen. I really liked Tayuya's character development in this chapter, and I wonder how things are gonna go with Shikamaru's team there :P I predict chaos hehe :P Great chapter as always Strath!
| labasignai chapter 13 . 5/31/2009
The first few chapters was a little bit boring but from the middle to the latest chapter story was truly great.
I'm waiting for the next update.
| RogerDering chapter 10 . 4/26/2009
I'm going to have comment her because despite it being a great fanfiction it hasa few facts wrong.
1. Sakura, Tsunade, Shikamaru and the rest of the Retrieval Team knew that Sasuke left out of his own free will from day one. Shikamaru still considered it a rescue because well this is Orochimaru we are talking about: Tsunade herself had been half convinced to kill Jiraiya to help him so she really doesn't have room to talk.
2. The curseseal turns the user into a slave to Orochimaru's will if he used it to much no matter if he went into the barrel of doom. The fact that Sasuke could kill Orochimaru means he never lost his free will like the Sound Four did.
Also, is to much to ask for fr Shikamaru to be smart? He's so friggin' incompetent in this fic. He gets upstaged by Tsunade at every turn.
| 123biteme chapter 13 . 3/31/2009
wow. first off thanks for finally updating. yea i like whats going on a uld be a little longer. try to keep the pace between the two consistent, not just walk then sprint. also nice cliffhanger, but still a little confused by it.
| Haraio chapter 13 . 3/29/2009
Hehehe, now that was cute _ The last scene put a HUGE smile on my face. I hope we get some lemony-ness between them soon. At least Tayu seems in the mood for some, even if she was a little bit drunk ;) Hope to see more from you soon
| StarkRavenmad12 chapter 12 . 12/31/2008
this is an amazing to fiction ! I like how you portrayed tayuya
| Haraio chapter 12 . 12/14/2008
Great chapter Strath! I really love the way you make the characters interact through their conversations, especially the two future lovebirds _~ And the scene with Tayuya trying to "strangle" Shikamaru has to be my favourite scene in the whole fanfic. There is just so much emotion in it
If there's any way at all I could see a way to improve on this story, it would be with some punctuation. Some of the sentences are kind of long and could use some commas, but that's just a minute detail, which doesn't impair much on the greatness of the story Can't wait to see more
| inugirl41 chapter 11 . 10/5/2008
yes you updated! Hm, i wonder what the matter iwth Tayuya.