Reviews for Wonder
shadowtrickster93 chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
i love this one! it's so short but it's so deep! i wish i could write like this, really. again, i love your descriptions, really vivid and you can really feel (well at least sense) what she's feeling. i love it! serioulsy, not making you bola.
Raging Pandemonium chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
GREAT. More fluff. XP
nicky-ji chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
That was good. Each line gets straight to the line with no waffle.

Not so sure when you say "she had always tried to be optimistic". During season one she says she is more of a realist than an optimistic. It may be both reconsidering rewording this line.

Other than that I think it reflected her personality quite well.