Well, after reading half-way though Flame, I realized that I really should be back here. So here I am. ;D~ (starts from beggining)

*stands and applaudes* That is honest to goodness one of the BEST Death Note story that I have read thus far. And I have read a lot. You're in my top three favorite now! I just don't even know where to start praising you without making this review 7 pages... Ok. I have a spot. The characters.

I personally LOVE what you did with them. I like the fact that you showed that L had a human side as well. I just love the sudden breakdown that L and Raito both endure. It strayed away from them just being stolid people that can do everything. Also the whole making L's love of sweets a mental condition? Perfect!

The ending was good as well. I must say that I kinda saw it comming. Not because you didn't execute it well, it was just I refused to believe that L would forget to turn off the camera. That raised my red flag for some reason... Um what else can I go on about... Nevermind, I'll end it here. I think it'd be redundant of me to say that I love this story, and give you undeniable kudos, so I won't _ lol! Happy writing!

P.S. How the hell did Raito know how to spell Lawliet? If someone said that name to me, I'd spell it Low-light. Guess that just proves how smart Light is eh? And I think I've said enough!

Huh? *reading comments* why are people asking for "the rest"? o it's over, right?

Meh. Anyway, I LOVE THE ENDING! Even though I'd pretty much figured their plan out, I was still a bit nervous, thinking "what IF I'm wrong, and this will end with their deaths?" I think I would've had to KILL you if you'd killed them! :'D Seriously, for the last 5 chapters, I kept skipping to the last few lines before reading the whole chapter - just to make sure noone dies or something like that _

I love this fic. It's currently on my top-3 list of favourite Death Note fanfictions! :) It's better than the majority of fics out there. LOVEITLOVEITLOVEITLOVEIT!

Wait~ Cant Misa see L's name? OwO

I love it! can't wait to read th rest!

I'm still reading the rest of the story through, but a few typos in this chapter caught my attention, so I figured I might as well point them out. You have a tendency to use the wrong word, but you use it's homonym. You used 'boarders' where it should have been 'borders' and 'weather' instead of 'whether.'

Other than that, I'm still reading to see how this will develop. It's really interesting so far.

Yays...

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you my friend are a great writer!

*fave*

AND you'll be seeing me comment of the Friend or Fave

this has got to be one of the most brilliant DN friendship ffic I've ever read! thank you so much for the most wonderful read! I had enjoyed it immensely~ -

fake their own death? well i guess it was for the best but would Light miss his sis and mom and dad? grr i have to read the next chapter tomorrow since i have to go to bed _

T_T aww thats cruel..

i didnt even know what was gonna happen next...on to the next chappy!

haha Gay? Light you have no idea (cant wait to read Friend or flame!)

LMAO! its a dude! haha Light's a bitch

No you don’t! Shut your mouth, L!

lmao i laughed so hard at that, dunno why tho o.O

I loved it! Light and L's plan was so genious! You really write wonderfully. ;D