Ok, you seriously should become an author! A real author. Your wording is incredible, your grammar is excellent, and your plot is just plain awesome. This is one of the best stories I ever read!

That was the most emotional chapter of any story I have ever read. Well done. I'm going to go cry now.

great

I forgot to login first...oops. Anyway that review was mine.

Bye-bye,

-Star Dancer

This seriously made me cry. Like, literally ball my eyes out. It was so sad...and beautiful...and wonderful. I loved it sooooo much. It was actually the first Death Note fanfiction I had ever read; and this gave me my inspiration for the first fanfic I wrote. I hope you get your book(s) finished and published. You're and amazing.

The best of luck to you,

-Star Dancer

I felt sad when L threw away kamiko's number. Coz their conversation was quite cute :) I am gonna start reading chapter 17 now. So far it's going great!

Officially my second fave story. My fave story is Friend of Flame.

As some of the reviewers have stated, their death was very well played out, though I did have some sceptical moments when the other managed to discover their 'infatuation' with each other before going with the decision to kick both L and Light out of the investigation. Overall, it's a very well thought out work. I love how real the interaction between L, Light and Kira is in this fic. However, I can't help wondering about the absence of Ryuuk in this fic where Kira reigned ruthlessly, and yet, no sign of Ryuuk was found.

Other than that, thanks for the wonderful piece. I'll be moving on to the sequel. ")

Fucking awesome! I want to read more but it's 3 am right now hahah

Awesome im years late in reading this but I love your writing!

I'm sorry but i can't help but notice a little mistake. You wrote about Light being chained to L and i note that you still left him with his memories. According to the anime, when Light gave up the Death note he lost every memory of possessing it, so therefore he lost every memory of being Kira. From what you ve written it would seem that Light is still keeping his memories. Thanks

Screw that, we all know Light wouldn't kill L, he loves him to much XD

Hmm u should write another death note fanfiction :) Heheh Uh-mm also you should explain more about the relation-ship with watari and L, You should have had light ask L about watari :D ;D ;;;;;;;;other;;;;;;;then;;;;;;that;;;;;;...PERRTYYYY GOOD FANFIC MEH FRIEND D; ! :dD

So many feels :'( Poor l

Your story's sooo sweeet! I LOVED it! I actually kept on readimg the whole chapters and i had an exam the day after! It was addictinng and thoughful!
Btw, what did L mean whenhe said that not everything he said was acting? English isn't my first language, and I'm afraid I couldn't guess which line he was referring to? :3