Wow.. Such a good story! And very well written! I really like it, Spotofpaint. I'm really really looking forwards to some more of the story. I'm supposed to be studying right now for exams, but I just couldn't resist reading! Please update soon!

You can tell they're good friends by the way they fight. :D Wow, you write like a demon! I really like Raito's duality. Kira's the enemy of L, but Yagami Raito is Ryuuzaki's friend... Ah, the prospects. Let us hope he can have his friend and kill it too... *laughs* Man I'm random. Thanks!

Lilz

Wow... This fic is awesome.

They're all so in character; I don't know how to can get into L and Raito's minds so easily. Both of them logically thinking out each step, calculating; I think you did justice to their true genius quite well.

Please continue updating this, it's great! I'm very surprised you haven't gotten more reviews than you have; people don't know what they're missing. _

What always gets me about Death Note is how much on a par Ryuuzaki and Raito are. Raito has the advantage, and Ryuuzaki is just slightly smarter. (Or has better instincts.) Perhaps if he had just a few more days, L would have won. I love how much thought you put into this story, and how deep and in-character they all are. I believe this is going to be one of the classics of Death Note fanfiction! Now... *slaps one hand down on an object on her desk and raises other hand* I solemnly swear on my new copy of 'Dragon Voice' that I will not complain about you not updating, unless you are gone for more than eight months with no word whatsoever. Apologies for the overly long review, and thanks!

Lilz

Yes. But if you would have read my disclaimer, I have already covered that. I've taken artistic license and have done that quite on purpose in order to make the story more fitting for my means. I have given a warning to those about to read it, so I hoped that coming into the story no one would be bothered by it. Thank you for trying to correct me, but I'm afraid I've already corrected myself! .

Thanks for the reviews everyone!

Good, but there's a major error here. When Light was chained to L, he had no memory of being Kira. Thus he really would be reacting like a normal teen chained to another man...it wouldn't be an act.

Sorry, but it always bugs me when people forget that.

ZOMG! PLEASE ONEGAI-SHIMAZU, POUR FAVOUR, POR FAVOR , PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! THIS IS TOO GOOD UGHNYA~! X3

I went to click on the 'Next Chapter' button, and there was NOTHING THERE! *gasp shock horror* Ooh, a Raito/Ryuuzaki friendship fic! Friendship fics are my favorite type of story, and there are few long Death Note fics. I can hardly wait to read more of this story! I very much like your visions into Ryuuzaki's and Raito's psychs. Thanks!

Lilz

UPDATE! awsome awsome awsome job! keep going, happy writing.

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