Reviews for The Love That Outlasted Empires
No Dabs Allowed chapter 5 . 5/21/2017
Wow, started off magnificently! Unfortunate that you stopped writing. Great story, so far.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14/2017
Do you like, not know any of the lore for the series? This is wildly of course, might as well just call it an AU.
InheritanceCycleLover chapter 5 . 7/6/2016
Would you please update?
All Hail The King chapter 5 . 6/21/2016
I don't have much hope for this being continued, seeing as how it's been years since an update, but I hope that sometime you could manage it as this story was great.
Paddy 9999 chapter 5 . 6/2/2016
Write more! And don't make it take a year.
Taboo7 chapter 5 . 10/5/2015
Love how the story is progressing so far
Guest chapter 5 . 8/16/2015
pls write more this is amazing
rick2244 chapter 5 . 8/12/2015
Plaese keep on writing about his topic
Guest chapter 2 . 6/27/2015
Well its not a sequel to inheritance but its still pretty good, i guess
kiwi chapter 5 . 6/11/2015
I have enjoyed this chapter greatly and I wish you the best of luck on future stories. May the stars watch over you and may peace rest in your heart.
anel chapter 5 . 4/10/2015
Continue, its probably better than the series itself
blaze chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Sapphira released a jet of blue fire in the air. Happiness wafted from Sapphira and engulfed Eragon. While Sapphira was sharing her seemingly endless emotions, a disturbance in the air caught her off guard. She plummeted to the ground at break neck speed.
"Letta!" Eragon yelled. Sapphira stopped inches from the ground.

You continue it.
Firefly's Fire Light chapter 5 . 4/10/2015
I have two pieces of advice for you. Don't jump to romance, keep it going slow ad make sure the mystery stays intact and you don't start revealing things. It really frustrates me when I'm on chapter 7 of a fan fiction and we're already in a sex scene. Also when you do chose to reveal the passion, try not to have them in a sex scene the first night! I mean, its not like Arya to randomly pull Eragon into her room and start harassing him! Its also not like Eragon to just give into her without any resistance! He needs to be like; "Arya, you must not be in your right mind, I know who you are and this isn't it. I know ruling can be stressful, but-" then maybe she kisses him or something blah blah blah... (I don't mean to copy that just an idea) Hope this helps with your next chapter! (I swear if there is a sew scene in the next chapter...) xD
NerdsxUnite chapter 5 . 3/29/2015
Um update?
Kiara chapter 5 . 3/11/2015
In the end, it's WAY different than you are writing it.
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