|Reviews for The Love That Outlasted Empires|
| the cool guy chapter 5 . 11/17/2008
this chapter is very well writen but should have more of a connection to the rest of the story. I think eragon and arya should get in all a very good story.
| Invaderm chapter 5 . 11/12/2008
I log onto your name to talk to you because I haven't in such a long time and what do I see!
I see that you updated this story ELEVEN!ELEVEN!DAYS AGO!
I was SO MAD!
But then I was like...
She updated and then I was very happy XD
I also found that I haven't made you one of my favorite authors! Sorry!
*looks over writing*
-Whats with all the exclaimation points today?-
I guess I miss you!
A sequal to Empire! That would complete my dreams!
I really want you to update this story now though, I'm such a sucker for EragonArya.
I'm very relieved that he doesn't have to make a gift (it was stressing me out and he doesn't even exsist : ( I guess he is real to me as sad as it sounds.)
I love the rewind back to "seven days of mourning"(or when she has to make her choice about whether or not to be Queen)
Words cannot desciribe how I felt when I read that scene.
I just stared at the computer screen like an imbecile and started talking to it:
"Eragon what are you doing you knurliheim, she's LOVES YOU YOU IDIOT!"
The little side dreams/stories were cute as well. I love the carrots. It reminds me of my friend Ashley. The last time she flirted with a guy she threw a shoe at him...
Maybe Arya's not AS violent...
She only kills the people that REALLY annoy her.
I have 8342 characters left...
now there's 8321...
Out there, somewhere, you know there's a person who used up all of those characters...
You know I'll read anything you write!
But PLEASE don't stress yourself more than need be. Life is very stressful unfortunaty : (
Please update and write back at earliest convenice! (And I mean it, I don't want you to be late for any sparring seccions with gorgous men)XD-
| Mike chapter 5 . 11/10/2008
I think a sequal To Empire Eridor and Ending would be great! It was a wonderfull story that i enjoyed very much..However i find myself liking and wanting more of this story..I trully hope you continue :)
| Eragon Sapphira Rider chapter 5 . 11/4/2008
I like the way you make Arya show her feelings. She is still a woman even if she is war hardened. And I do think that she is not as cold as she seems. Great story though! Keep it up!
| bolkite chapter 5 . 11/2/2008
Write with your heart and soul do not stop. AND HURRY UP.
| bolkite chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
good story P
| NinjaDriver chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
this is really good! i cant wait for the next chapter...please keep updating...and make a sequel to empire!
| AFX787359 chapter 5 . 10/25/2008
Please do a sequal to Empire. And update this one ASAP!
| Lazielow chapter 5 . 10/25/2008
This chapter is so good. I like it !
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Tabitha of MoonAurora chapter 5 . 10/23/2008
Do not worry about spoilers for Brisingr. There are only about three chapters worth reading anyway. Nothing could ruin Brisingr for me more than the book itself. I would like to see an arise of a sequel for Empire.
What you people call fillers aren't really fillers. (Fillers are Brisingr) Anyway I love this chapter. I thought you did an excellent job of filling in the gap in the story that I couldn't understand. Eragon's dream flashback makes everything so blatantly obvious that I'm surprised Eragon is so stupid and blind. Maybe it takes a woman to read a woman fictional or not. Again, love the chapter. I wonder what a guy would get out of reading this?
| Johndan chapter 5 . 10/16/2008
Hurry up and update!
| 0Snuffles0 chapter 5 . 10/13/2008
no. oh so sad, i thought there were 7 chaptesr for some reason, I happily went for the next and theres none...so sad. I have to tell u. idk what u do when u write. but u make me concentrate so hard on the pages that i occlude from the rest of my sorroundings lol. i just notice that. all of a sudden when i finish the chapter i started hearing music from my neibor, and a bunch of kids from the school close to my house that i didnt noticed before lol. man, update soon please. awesome fic
| 0Snuffles0 chapter 3 . 10/13/2008
damn. so intense. well pandoras box is open now lol, lets c what comes out of that lol
| 0Snuffles0 chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
have I told u ur my favorite Eragon/arya Fic writer?. no? well I tell u now. damn always a good start. ill be reading this for today but It'll be over soon lol, I hope ur planning on the continuation of eragon, eridor and ending fic, that one was just awesome. really hope u continue it. ill get bck to reading this one. awesome first chapter
| classyjazz93 chapter 5 . 10/11/2008
I love this story and the ida It's fresh not overly used plot. I love a good clifhanger but not when you don't UPDATE!