|Reviews for The Future's Past|
| Penelope Anne Neptune chapter 8 . 2/7/2013
I loved this story. It was soooo cute Romy is definatly my favorite X-Men couple. Can't wait to read more from you.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Great story so far!
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/14/2012
Cute! This was a good story :)
| FabulousFever chapter 8 . 3/16/2012
this story was great until the 7th chapter, thats when i begun to have issues with it. okay first off finding out you're pregnant in the same day you conceived is scientifically impossible, unless you are mentioning some sort of new scientific discovery, but you didn't so i had to raise an eye brow.
secondly, remy hadn't spent anytime away from rogue since ennui came back so that would have meant he bought the engagement ring before hand, i could accept this if it weren't for the fact that when he was sneaking into the mansion he had only just admitted to himself that he loved her.
in time travel they say you should never talk to anyone because you'll screw up the future, but i can deal with that in this fic, but she can't not go back to the future, she would disintegrate because she is a time paradox. its a bit much the whole her staying thing. she could have gone back because at that point remy had the knowledge to change the future and save everyone.
on a better note, i really liked the idea of the story, it was unique and really fun, i love the name ennui and it seemed like a thing remy would do. i loved the grandpa logan references as well as the "no cursing" thing. i really loved the little parts with pyro because he is great.
all in all it was a good story, but it moved way to quickly, all set in a 2 day scheme plus the prologue and epilogue it could use some revision, and i know i definitely would have enjoyed it more if the plot holes were filled it, but once again good story, needs a bit of work.
ps - this is the longest review i have ever written, feel loved (its okay if you don't)
| Hyper Puck chapter 4 . 1/13/2011
It doesn't fit. About Ennui having an older brother. You said she time travelled back 18 yrs and she's 13. That means she wouldn't be born for another 5 yrs. Though you said when she was 10 she had an 18 yr old brother. Unless Remy and Rouge popped that baby out quick, there was no way he could have been 18.
| Let the Storm Rage On chapter 8 . 12/13/2009
HILARIOUS! LOVE IT! ADORE IT! WONDERFUL!
| Allleila chapter 8 . 8/28/2009
Aw that story was so sweet. This story should be way more popular and you should have more reviews as you deserve it. The story was well writen, it had a scent plot and the characters weren't all OC like in slot of fanfiction. Can't wait to read your other works.
| PenguinsHockey14 chapter 8 . 6/19/2009
Loved your story!
| Red red red ribbon chapter 8 . 11/16/2008
love it !1
| JessicaFoxtrott chapter 8 . 11/13/2008
This was a fanastic, i honestly loved. although i thought may Ennui should have gone back to the future, maybe have had remy and rogue do soemthing that disrupted that future so that they didnt all die and there for Ennui had to go back?
Anyway just a thought, the story is awesome either way :)
| tfobmv18 chapter 8 . 4/10/2008
I like it. I doubt that they'll die cause of the Rippers in this version due to the fact that Remy will probably never even let them visit New Orleans. Well keep up the good work.
| SAPPHIRELIBRA1995 chapter 8 . 3/29/2008
i loved the story!
| allyg1990 chapter 8 . 2/2/2008
Cute! I liked this.
| gambitfan85 chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
I enjoy reading your Romy story. Very nicely written.