Reviews for Cruel
rhf1229 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
wow. really well-written and introspective. i really liked the way you wrote how future trunks weighed each option. also his interaction with vegeta was on point. Nice job!
divahahahaha chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
oh this story is good! very good!

thanks for writing this
randomcat23 chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Wow, that was great. Loved the father/son bonding. You did it so well and without making them OOC.

I really enjoyed this.
*sniff, sniff* OH, LOOL WHAT U DID! U MADE ME CRY!

I agree w/ what everyone else's reviews. Amazing job. :)
bluefire chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
awesome made teh reader feel his emotion as he struggled with his options. nicely done.
jdeppgirl4 chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
I don't know if it was your intention to make people cry but it worked. Everything about this oneshot is perfect, especially how you decscribed Trunks' thinking process. Great job :)
The General of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Absolutely breath-taking. I think you hit the nail on the head with this wonderful little oneshot, my friend. I can really see all of this happening in the series. I particularly liked Trunks's internal struggle of whether or not to stay, and his two-second jealousy of himself. :-P

You personified both Trunks and Vegeta perfectly...this'll be one for the favorites list. _ Great work!

-Da General