Reviews for What If?
SapphireRubyHilton chapter 1 . 3/11
Ah, the house elf dialogue...
fandomgirl723 chapter 1 . 3/8
LOL I absolutely adore the ending! Great final touch!
Dab chapter 1 . 3/3
Kyaa! She was his wife?! I didn't know that till he mentioned that. I loved it!
viv-heart chapter 1 . 2/8
This was cute. I liked the hideous tie and how you didn't make it clear that they wäre dating from the beginning. Was a nice plottwist
Warrioress Eagle chapter 1 . 1/24
More importantly, what if you wrote more freakishly picture- perfect stuff like this?!
XD
Dracohasmycat chapter 1 . 1/20
I soo thought they were at Hogwarts in the library ubtil the whole bomb of "home" was mentioned. I was genuinely surprised. The poor house elves hahahaha.
GreatGreyOwl777 chapter 1 . 1/20
Ahem. Got worked up. What if I said I love your writing?;p
GreatGreyOwl777 chapter 1 . 1/20
I LOVE IT! I'M REALLY NOT KIDDING! I CAN SO SEE WHY YOU GOT THAT PRIZE!
SabbyMelody chapter 1 . 1/10
Loveeeee this~ Very funny
Zaphyro azul chapter 1 . 11/10/2016
HEHEHEHEHE! Very good!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
The best I read so far
thenineteenninetyfive chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
The dialogue of the Elves were entertaining! I was picturing them as students at the first part of the story and then suddenly, you pull the 'wife' word in and my imagination has crumbled hahaha. Oops, they're adults and they're married
CJ chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
At first I thought they were at Hogwarts. It was just a day when they didn't wear uniforms. Especially because he called her Granger at first.
dramione3lova chapter 1 . 8/23/2016
hey hey thats me laughing mione and the elfs hate the tie
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
I loved this! Really well written and great little story.
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