Reviews for The Adventure to the Girl's Dormitory
Zarrian chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
LOL... that was great. I haven't even read the book, and I got the last line. Great job.

dollar-diamond-ring chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
Hahaha! This was great! Boq is so funny!'s.wickedjelly chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
I laughed, I really did. :) This was pretty darn funny, I must say!

Nice job.
Elphie Bubble chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Hahaha, loved it! And that last line certainly did make me laugh. :)
The Pixess chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
ROFL, LMAO! That was seriously hysterical, and totally in character.

“If you do get caught, though, scream so we can run.”- i love that so, so much.

Honestly, you have no idea how much i needed a laugh right now thanks SO MUCH!


p.s. last line: um, how bout the alter, lol?
Dyani chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
Oh, the last line definitely made me smile. :D Well, the whole thing did, but that line especially. The section of the novel that's from Boq's POV has a different sort of tone to it, and you evoked that same Boq-like air very well. And you gave the boys the spotlight for a change, which is always fun.

There are a few spelling/homophone errors, like "sites" when it should be "sights", and "peaked" instead of "peeked", but those are easy to fix. :)

This was pretty much exactly what I needed to read tonight to cheer me up, so thank you for writing it! :D