|Reviews for Written in Sand|
| BrokenChosenofEva chapter 15 . 7/5/2019
This was a wonderful work, I'm glad I came across it!
I enjoyed your portrayal of the Tok'Ra, and I didn't know I needed Jacob understanding Selmak's sounds because he's the host until you wrote it here, that's a wonderful addition.
| dinopoodle chapter 15 . 9/4/2018
Please write a sequel! Great story, maybe she becomes a tok'ra.
| amare2scribo chapter 15 . 2/1/2015
Really liked this story, so different to other SG1 fanfics I have read.
| coppertop777 chapter 15 . 12/24/2013
i really liked it good ending
| coppertop777 chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
love it so far only on chapter 5 cant wait to read the rest very well written and imaginative and stuck to the characters personalities from the show well too
| Greenlaser chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
An intriqing opening chapter. The storyline shows foresight as well as an understanding of karmic repercussions. The language is colloquial for those of 21st century high school socialization. It could use some brighter adjectives. There are a couple of "tense" switches and one possesive pronoun with an unclear reference which are slightly distracting. It has a good flow and I liked the idea. It has a strong finish inspiring me to want to read more. Overall "A-"
| FORD B chapter 15 . 11/13/2009
Great read and great ending!
| Morgomir chapter 15 . 11/10/2009
Great ending. Keep up the good work.
| MuseUrania chapter 15 . 11/8/2009
I was surprised to see this story pop up again, but I liked the ending. Didn't even have to go back into the story to remember it. I hope you do write a sequel even if it takes another three years.
| Roeskva chapter 15 . 11/8/2009
I liked your story - thanks for writing it :) Please write more stories about the Tok'ra!
| Princess-Lazy-Chan chapter 15 . 11/8/2009
lol this was an awesome finish to a wicked sory :)
| ALIMOO1971 chapter 15 . 11/7/2009
Great story and chapter, just one question, why didn't Jacob use the healing device on Maria wounds? keep up the good work
| Princess-Lazy-Chan chapter 14 . 7/9/2009
cool as i like it :)
| ALIMOO1971 chapter 14 . 2/12/2009
GReat chapter, sorry for not reading and reviewing sooner, my husband and i just move into a new house last week, the place still looks like a tornado been through it. we are slowly unpacking. looking ford to the next chapter, now for me back to my two weeks wourth of e-mails, lol
| FORD B chapter 14 . 2/11/2009
This chapter was far from boring. Sad to hear the story is ending, but that's how stories go. Looking forward to seeing how it ends.