This was a wonderful work, I'm glad I came across it!
I enjoyed your portrayal of the Tok'Ra, and I didn't know I needed Jacob understanding Selmak's sounds because he's the host until you wrote it here, that's a wonderful addition.

Please write a sequel! Great story, maybe she becomes a tok'ra.

Really liked this story, so different to other SG1 fanfics I have read.

i really liked it good ending

love it so far only on chapter 5 cant wait to read the rest very well written and imaginative and stuck to the characters personalities from the show well too

An intriqing opening chapter. The storyline shows foresight as well as an understanding of karmic repercussions. The language is colloquial for those of 21st century high school socialization. It could use some brighter adjectives. There are a couple of "tense" switches and one possesive pronoun with an unclear reference which are slightly distracting. It has a good flow and I liked the idea. It has a strong finish inspiring me to want to read more. Overall "A-"

Great read and great ending!

Great ending. Keep up the good work.

I was surprised to see this story pop up again, but I liked the ending. Didn't even have to go back into the story to remember it. I hope you do write a sequel even if it takes another three years.

I liked your story - thanks for writing it :) Please write more stories about the Tok'ra!

lol this was an awesome finish to a wicked sory :)

*Lazy-chan

Great story and chapter, just one question, why didn't Jacob use the healing device on Maria wounds? keep up the good work

cool as i like it :)

"glare**chi

GReat chapter, sorry for not reading and reviewing sooner, my husband and i just move into a new house last week, the place still looks like a tornado been through it. we are slowly unpacking. looking ford to the next chapter, now for me back to my two weeks wourth of e-mails, lol

This chapter was far from boring. Sad to hear the story is ending, but that's how stories go. Looking forward to seeing how it ends.