Reviews for Bowser II
austin.todd.315 chapter 20 . 5/16/2014
This Fanfiction ha sbeen amazing and unique, with no true Protagonist or Antagonist. the incest thing wa sht eonly part I truly didn't like, bbut its easy to forgive and look over since its not the only sideplot. I didn't get the Ostro quote though. the final fight was genrally good, but Junior seemed a bit out of character. Sure, everyone is in this, but he just isn't one to complain the way he did when Fawful sicked up his sword, it seemed kinda like a babyish whine in my mind. I like how the Mark of the Dead from Super Koopa World had made an appearance in this, and I loved the scene with Wart. For some reason ou mad ehtat death scene, the FINAL death scenbe, funny, with the way that Yoshi kiilled him and what he said after. Reminds me of the Lion King, where I firs theard that phrase. this is definetly a dark ending. Not necissarily because the "protagonist" died, but because of what's going to happen: fawful and Cackletta ruling the world. Not good. fawful sure does seem to idolize her a lot especialy in your head canon. Overall, a great fnafiction. 94/100.
austin.todd.315 chapter 19 . 5/16/2014
I abssolutely LOVE that dream scene, and the shared despair and died quote too. Still, the whole thing when Juior saw his reflection in the bucket kinda scared me. I have some knowledge of Freddy Krueger's work. there's one last chapter, and honestly, I can't wait to read it.
austin.todd.315 chapter 18 . 5/16/2014
I like how all of the characters are in character for your headcanon, such as Kammy's ,ove for Bowser being a great and ffatal weakness, yet you've still managed to manipulate the loyalty's quite well. The climax seems to be coming up, and it honestly seems that anhy isde can win, Junior may be a bad guy, but he is sort of the Protagonist, I guess.
austin.todd.315 chapter 17 . 5/16/2014
Junior vs Fawful! I like it! Bowser can beat Fawful! Time to see if Junior can too!
austin.todd.315 chapter 16 . 5/16/2014
More manipulzation, though I have to ask, what did Richard III do in the play to get Daisy's character to trust him?
austin.todd.315 chapter 15 . 5/16/2014
Hmmm... more drama... interesting...
austin.todd.315 chapter 14 . 5/16/2014
I'm getting the feeling that Iggy and Wendy are gonna comite suicide. Is it gonna be that whole, stabbing yourself to death while you make out so youll be together foreve rthing, like that one book I read? I wonder...
austin.todd.315 chapter 13 . 5/16/2014
Well played Junior, well played.
austin.todd.315 chapter 12 . 5/13/2014
Cool chapter.
austin.todd.315 chapter 11 . 5/13/2014
That was sudden, now even petey Pirhanna ha been betrayed... great chapter.
austin.todd.315 chapter 10 . 5/13/2014
What the F******************************************?! I'm gonna have to criticise this... incestt? That's just sicck... and now Kamek's killing too? poor Lemmy... noone is safe... who's next... Ludwig?
austin.todd.315 chapter 9 . 5/13/2014
Junior sure loves kikll ing in this Fanfiction... he kills morton, morton's favorite sibling, Luigi, luigi's dead body, the coffin, probably other people... what a dark story.
austin.todd.315 chapter 8 . 5/13/2014
You know, i've noticed that you really make Junior the real bastard in these fanfictions... this is a great chapter, although even if Junior and Larry get their way Junior'll just have to kill lLarry anywsay, since Larry's older and all.
austin.todd.315 chapter 7 . 5/13/2014
Roy is dead? that stink.s
austin.todd.315 chapter 6 . 4/16/2014
Poor Roy... poor Roy indeed...
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