|Reviews for Bowser II|
| Two Stooges chapter 20 . 2/18/2011
As of my knowledge, this appears to be the only way to actually make Shakespeare good. Too bad Junior learned his lesson in Act 5:5 instead of 1:1.
| Matthais Unidostres chapter 20 . 10/10/2010
I am Matthais123
That was amazing. You were able to take a famous play and change it into a Mario Fan Fic. You are talented. However, you also REALLY BLEW IT BIG TIME.
You should have had Iggy and Wendy plan on taking the throne and ruling togehter, which breaks a law like "Brothers and sisters cannot rule togehter as an unmarried king and queen". It could have been some sort of vital, important law that ruined their image instead. You tarnished the whole story.
However, I forgive you. It would be something if you edited it out, but you do what you want.
You shouldn't have sinned like that you know. Jesus died for you, so writing clean is the least you could do. Beg for mercy and salvation, and he may save you from judgement on May 21st ( .)
Anyway, you are a really good author.
This is Matthais123 signing off!
| Calderious chapter 20 . 6/28/2007
Woah. There was one thing that popped into my mind after the last chapter that didn't when I saw the end of the play: SEQUEL! I WANNA SEQUEL!
This was a very good story. I was sort of worried the ending would be "happy ever after", which wouldn't really be Fawful's style. Now it seems like Bowser Jr. may have company in the underworld...eventually. Bowser might regain his power, Cackletta may be coming back...Awesome story. Great job!
| Lord Crayak chapter 20 . 6/27/2007
This story was awesome! And quite the ominous ending.
| Calderious chapter 19 . 6/27/2007
Ooh, awesome! I can't wait to see the fight!
Speaking of which, what you said about it, the play version I saw was somewhat corny too. Since they're only backdrop was the Tower, its hard to have a big battle with soldiers and horses (especially if you are confined to a pretty small stage). They still did it pretty well, though-at least, as good as was possible.
The ghost scene was sweet. Still, I haven't quite gotten over the incest thing, which is...strange...but the whole ghostly shin-dig was awesome. I really want to see this fight.
In the version I saw, Richard's pep talk is a little more confident, and his last line is something like, "And if we can't make it to heaven, then hand-in-hand to hell", and then his army cheers, insinuating they're all evil, but confident. I like this version, with the sort of "Aw jeez" philosophy of Jr.'s forces. Update soon please!
| Calderious chapter 18 . 6/26/2007
Its actually a very good idea. Bowser Jr., being portrayed as Richard I...Why didn't I think of that?
The way that the adult Bowser Jr. is described is awesome. The scarf and tooth idea was very good-it fit well for the similarities to Richard I.
I haven't studied the play-yet-but I have seen the play, which is really good. The characters are very well selected-Petey Piranha is probably my favorite, since he was my favorite character in the play, and fits the description well-but the future Jr. is also awe-inspiring. King Boo, Kamek, they're all excellent matches. Good stuff!
I look forward to seeing your renditions to the battle, the "my kingdom for a horse" line, and "the dirty dog is dead" line. Update soon please!
| Lord Crayak chapter 17 . 6/25/2007
I'm seriously hoping Jr. gets what he deserves...
| Lord Crayak chapter 1 . 6/23/2007