|Reviews for Scenes From a Balcony|
| shadowwalker213 chapter 6 . 7/9/2007
I am thoroughly enjoying this progression. Your OC is so believable, and the hints and innuendos are so fun ("I know something you don't know") LOL
| trecebo chapter 6 . 7/8/2007
Rut roh! The MIS has been spotted. The game is afoot! Release the hounds!
| junkfoodmonkey chapter 5 . 7/8/2007
I get the feeling that's not the last we've seen of the Man In Sunglasses. Or some friends of his at least.
I'm really enjoying this, beautifully written as always.
| Harm Marie chapter 5 . 7/6/2007
I like your 'scenes' and I'm looking forward to the next.
| shadowwalker213 chapter 5 . 7/6/2007
You're continuing in great form :-) I like this mystery man you've added to the menu now - an additional reason to keep up with the story. It really is interesting to see all this through a "stranger's" eyes.
| trecebo chapter 5 . 7/5/2007
Oh, I wonder who the MIS works for? That ought to prove fun to figure out! I like the progression. It feels right, not to boggy.
| trecebo chapter 4 . 6/25/2007
Yes, I can see that playing out. No money, no doctor...sounds like starving author to me. :D
| shadowwalker213 chapter 4 . 6/25/2007
Just a quick note to say that I'm still enjoying this - a very natural and easy friendship growing between the two that's very nice to "watch". :-)
| marcey chapter 3 . 6/24/2007
i'm really enjoying the story so far. you've done an excellent job with just a little dialogue and scene setting. looking forward to more! i always enjoy a good hannibal story...
| Dr Alice chapter 3 . 6/24/2007
I'm really enjoying this different take on Hannibal. The image of two smokers bonding on the balcony is great, and I can't wait to see what comes next with the injured narrator!
| trecebo chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
Well, SD, the 500 limit explains things. I'd wish for longer chapters, but this will do nicely, since you have them written so well, eh? I thought so.
| louise chapter 2 . 6/21/2007
interesting.i would imagine hannibal would appear this mysterious to write more,.
| trecebo chapter 2 . 6/20/2007
Dude, I must say, you have Hannibal pegged so far. I can see Peppard playing this out very well, almost choke on the smoke as it were...who does the writer look like?
| trecebo chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
You are off to a good start. Very in tense, grammtically, as well as POV. I'll continue with chapter two.
| shadowwalker213 chapter 2 . 6/20/2007
It's kind of "meandering" - but I like it. :-) And I'd like to see how it develops. Interesting seeing Hannibal from an outsider's POV - especially one who has no idea who John really is. Not sure I want him to find out, either ;-)