|Reviews for Fragments|
| landerprime chapter 47 . 3/4
I like thus one a lot. I hope someone picks it up. I can think of good scenes, but can't find a whole story in it myself. The magic systems are close enought that they could be hacked to fit. The only major thing different is how potions work. I like the idea of Indy being a "magic thug" with more power than finess. And a scene where harry learns to apperate could be fun.
| AnFan-n-More chapter 65 . 1/27
I really like this sequence of fragments. Also, as to your AN:, Dragon Naturally Speaking plus a typist who cleans things up, equals a lazy but productive dogbertcaroll :D
| AnFan-n-More chapter 39 . 1/27
I'm still bummed at the realization that my pithy observations likely won't mean anything, but...
re: AN2: I bet that Sirius would cast an animate spell on the Statue of Liberty just to get her to treat the Washington Monument like a stripper pole to. Ok, I realize I would have no takers since he's traveling with Xander.
| AnFan-n-More chapter 38 . 1/27
Hmm, I had a thought after sending off my last review, or maybe the one before that. You probably would have to look up what I'm referencing since I haven't been doing more than giving references like "your AN2:". And, you probably don't have time or interest in going back to look up information on a chapter that is ancient. Unless you reread some of these for inspiration when you get a new review on them... Which would be a lot of work considering you probably get a lot of reviews, meaning that you would only do it for a review that caught you interest, if even then... which sucks because, I try to leave pithy observations about the chapters which probably don't really mean anything to you since you don't know the topic of the chapter without going back to reread it :/ And, that means that the reviews don't have any more meaning than a simple "That's Great!" would have. :( *sigh*
Since I've gone and left such a long comment, I'll say what was my original thought on this chapter (unless I've reviewed it already, then in this PM). Your AN says it was just a redo idea for Xander going back in time, but not good enough to continue, maybe throwing in a few more curve balls or other strangeness might help?
| AnFan-n-More chapter 35 . 1/27
*chuckle* :) Pick on Buffy day could be a new series of shorts for you! Ask you muse, she might agree...
| AnFan-n-More chapter 34 . 1/27
Hehehe, this one is wacked! Funny too. Your AN2 makes me think of the MLP Loops story on this site.
| AnFan-n-More chapter 33 . 1/27
Ok, I found this one funny enough to have probably reviewed this chapter before. I'm tempted to send you a PM if this review is rejected :D
I laughed so loud, over almost the entire chapter, that I'm kind of afraid that I've annoyed my apartment neighbors! Too bad you don't have a plot for this, it's hilarious!
| AnFan-n-More chapter 31 . 1/27
AHA! Much better than the last chapter :) And, I'm hoping to see this sometime soon in Lacking An Anchor. Or just sometime, if you are working on something else. I really can't complain at all about a story not being updated, as long as you are putting out work that thoroughly entertains me.
| AnFan-n-More chapter 30 . 1/27
Is this still in store for Lacking an Anchor? I imagine that the idea got pulled and dusted off after your muse thought about it for a bit. Or, you were really in the mood to write and didn't have any ideas... hehe :)
I think that Lacking an Anchor is much more fun than this chapter of Fragments would indicate. I'm glad. While it would be fun to see Buffy torn apart because yes I am grossed out and disgusted by the thought of her and Angel, it doesn't make for a fun story to read (and probably write). Unless you are in need of venting spleen due to real life.
Come to think on it, most of your stories that make it out of Fragments and it's sequel are much more upbeat and cheerful. I'm glad you've got an upbeat muse. Tell her thanks for me.
Also give your typists a big ol thank you from me also!
| AnFan-n-More chapter 28 . 1/27
This kind of reminds me of a story I've been reading lately. This Switch Won't Turn Off, by MistofRainbows on TtH. Though that one is getting kind of wacky :)
| AnFan-n-More chapter 24 . 1/27
You know, if you can convince your muse to come up with it, I'd really like to see more of this one. ;)
I'm rereading your Fragments simply because I've already reread all of your other work and haven't found anything new worth reading. Annnddd, your old work and these fragments are actually better entertainment than some of even the good stuff that's being put up. :)
| kamiros chapter 39 . 1/3
ch 39 i had read this story before but not this part i really hope theirs more this is great
| kamiros chapter 25 . 1/2
i really kind-of wished to see more of ch 25
| kamiros chapter 4 . 1/2
ch4 loved bob
| Eldersprig chapter 55 . 12/29/2013
Odin is the god of berserkers, not Thor