|Reviews for Chimera|
| neonharlot chapter 42 . 8/8/2013
This story has captured my heart. The way in which you spun the story was so captivating, i couldn't stop reading. I'm not going to lie; this story surpasses even some of the novels i've read.
The characters are real and believable. I don't think i'll ever forget what these characters went through. (Even if it is fictional)
Its a unique perspective on the soulmate bond. There may have been miniscule errors, but you've got a way with words that leaves me speechless. Utterly amazing.
| Guest chapter 42 . 5/5/2013
Oh u evil soul there better be an epilogue at least other wise ill die never knowing what has happend between them
| GoBlueDevils09 chapter 2 . 3/5/2013
Very confusing to read
| Guest chapter 42 . 1/6/2013
This story was written for 9 years?
| Guest chapter 42 . 12/21/2012
that was awsome and a great fanfiction good job
| Maryam chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
i love this story it's so amazing
| Bluebell Balloons chapter 42 . 6/4/2012
This is, by far, the best story I've read on fanfiction. Your character development and descriptions are spot on, and it never failed to capture my attention. I seriously stayed up until 3am unable to stop reading.
I really enjoyed reading this story, despite the times I wanted to cry. Haha. The premise and characterization are incredibly unique, and I love the fact that Chatoya and Blue's relationship isn't like the relationships of most soul mates. It makes it far more interesting.
I absolutely love this story, and I hope you'll continue to write more soon! :D
| thelittledevil333 chapter 42 . 3/6/2012
I know that this might meen nothing to ya, but Blue reminds me of Lord Byron a lot :) keep writing- i think you're great! This story is one of my favs
| ssslash chapter 42 . 2/8/2012
hi there, just thought i'd give you your thousandth review. unless i'm too late, of course. then nevermind.
Chimera was lovely and definitely will always be one of my favorite stories of all time. keep writing!
| renyun chapter 42 . 1/10/2012
This was such a lovely story.
Chatoya I felt was probably the best developed character in this story. I could feel her anguish, her heartbreak, and her love throughout the chapters. The feelings you evoke through your characters are amazing. While Blue was definitely a hard character for me to swallow because he is such an antithesis of what I feel the heroine should deserve, he was definitely very interesting to read.
I also felt the concept that while everyone may be destined to have a soulmate they may not necessarily love them is an interesting take on the soulmates/bonds.
This story was epic and I'm so glad I read it. Hope you will continue to write!
| Aethiana chapter 19 . 1/9/2012
There were on his arms that she had never noticed; they only showed now because he was icy-pale all over, as though he'd slid through the surface of an arctic lake and couldn't find his way out again.
- They were on his arms? There were on his arms what she had never noticed?
He was deaf, and dumb, and blind, and tainted, and Tam wouldn't' want him
- Extra apostrophe at wouldn't'
| Aethiana chapter 17 . 1/9/2012
"I've never been about fair," he heard his own voice say as he leaned closer to her. Fireblade's words, and Fireblade's voice, but this was not Fireblade's feeling, this yearning to protect her, to curl her in his arms and makes her his in a way that could not be broken by time or place or person.
- to curl her in his arms and MAKE her his?
| Aethiana chapter 15 . 1/9/2012
Same as previous chapter:
"He didn't look any less fierce sleeping. It was strange; almost every other Nightworlder she looked somehow vulnerable in sleep." - she looked at? she saw looked somehow? Missing something, anyhow.
| Aethiana chapter 13 . 1/9/2012
"He was standing in the doorway, watching though as though something perplexed him, though there was nothing that showed that in his expression:" - Same as my comments on previous chapter, extra 'though'? Meant to be a different word?
| Aethiana chapter 11 . 1/9/2012
Spelling/ grammatical/ sentence structure errors of some sort? Missing words?
"As she let him bear her off, she could have sworn she a whisper light as a kiss brushed her ears." - Missing word heard?
"And I thought Tam was the unfortunate one," he muttered to the air. "I hope Bernie runs into her. She's make mincemeat of him." - She'll?
Have noticed these sorts of little errors with the previous chapters as well, but been too caught up in the story to actually stop and tell. You spin a story exceptionally well.