Reviews for The Fruit of Dead Hopes
Elflocks chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
hey! :D aww, still very sad, and that ultrasound picture part still gets me.
MaddieStJ chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
It reads well. Very poignant.
MaskedDevera chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Wow, this was beautiful. So well written and sad, sharp and crisp writing all the way through. Both of the characters felt real to me, as well as in character. Added to my favorites.
whatdoihavetodo chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Oh, that was really good! I really liked it. I felt it portrayed Charlie fairly and the end was so sad. It was especially interesting because it was just between the two of them and barely mentioned Betty. So how long had Charlie been pregnant?
countryapple chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
This is a heavy laden piece but it works wonderfully. Great story writing - the interaction between Henry and Charlie - Well Done!
spiceandnice chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
OMG. Another brilliant piece.

I am not a big fan of dialogue fics, but this kept my attention so well. The characters were so in tune, and written so well, I could fill in all the balnks for myself and picture it in my head.

The speech was so crisp and biting, I tensed up with them. I love that Charlie was somewhat sympathetic and somewhat still a bitch. You showed both sides, and you portrayed her fairly. And I wanted to hug Henry at the end, and tell him it'd be okay.

I am your fangirl for life.