|Reviews for Last Request|
| Make war not love. war is fun chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
| AngelKougaeri chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Really well written, and a nice take on how it could have ended.
| aurora chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
i loved it! you write beautifully, and make everything believable.
any chance of you writing any m/w stories? pretty please?
| OneBadCat chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Love this! Even though she took Ray from him, he trusts his son with only her.
MaxWhite stories are always good - yours went somewhere cool.
| Elliesmeow chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
I really, really liked that. Great fic. It made me weepy, I always liked Ames, even as a villain so I'm glad that Max had pity on him in his death. I'm almost sorry it's over but where else would it go?
Thanks for posting.
| GreySide58 chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Very good. I liked this. It's true too, they want his son safe and happy. Good work Bless!
| purplebunnywabbit chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Well that is very interesting I must say... good though. Liked it, nice work :D
| Moonlite Star chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
well written. it was very touching. keep writing. :)