|Reviews for Of Patriarchs|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
Aww. There was definitely a potty mouth Naruto and Jiraiya in there which is very OOC, but the ending about makes up for it. It's true, Naruto would recognize someone he could see as a father figure.
| xxxQueenxxx chapter 1 . 3/6/2017
The review I posted on A History of Grief was actually meant for this story ,but my computer fucked up ,sorry .
| WraithFaithUnstable chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
I like it.
And I don't.
The nice thing to say is that I just like it.
And I do.
But I also dont.
But I do...
| saashi samy chapter 1 . 11/3/2016
Very sweet and sad story
| fallkid19 chapter 1 . 10/21/2016
that sucked tbh
| Helios7406 chapter 1 . 9/28/2016
No Naruto you don't have a father,no man or woman ever put you first or did right by you in anything other than a half ass manner.
| Raven Blanchard chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
This fucking made me cry goddammit. It's not even that long. It even got Naruto's dad's name wrong and all. But it still made me cry. That fucking "YOU ARE!" line just tugged on my heartstrings like nobody's business. Good job on this fic. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
Touching...and I'm totally not crying at all...NOT AT ALL. I'M NOT CRYING.
| lampshadezz chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
this was so heart-wrenchingly sad and i am currently sobbing. yep. full-on crying, snot dripping down my nose, the whole deal. maybe its the whole PMSing sorta thing but i can't stop crying. this is such a cute fanfic, well done! :D
| davidben1935hot chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
Right in the feels.
| bat-tron chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
*curls into a ball on the floor* Oh. That was lovely. I loved this so much! *sobs* Dx THE FEELS ARE TAKING OVERRR!
| Yuu3 chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Sniff. And I'm proud Naruto hit Jiraya hard then and there. Because he's an idiot.
| The Musician's Song chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
A pretty poignant one-shot. I think I actually got a bit teary and that doesn't happen often.
| readwritemanga chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
So...snif...-crying eyes out-
| redchinese chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
very bittersweet :)
makes me miss ero-sennie all the more- and its great because its so like the to be this way