Reviews for Deceitful Above All Things
Raccoon48 chapter 1 . 10/1
Hi. :) I read this many, many years ago. Thought I would take another look today, and I am floored by how incredible your writing still is. I read it happily, chuckling and smiling until the very end, and then burst into tears. I hope so much that you are doing well, and hopefully writing, somewhere, somehow, because. Damn. 3
Lazypage chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
Wow, that hurt. Even knowing it would end that way, my heart is still getting squeezed. At first I doubted the intellectual portrayal of Axel. By the end I adored the snarky/ingenious voice. Plus my vocabulary has expanded by like seven words. The Spanish at the end was a nice touch too.

Haria todo por ti/For you, I would do everything-you were really going for a gut-punch huh?

Well, now the there is some hope that a form of Axel and Roxas will reunite in KH3.

Thank for you writing this. It's beautiful and epic and perfect. Fanfiction can be a high form of art-this fic proves it.
xionnevermore chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
This reality isn't something I wanted to read on AkuRoku day, but...I have to say, it's very good. :)
Adi Sagestar chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Damn this is an awesome story, what a great introduction for me to have to this pairing. I'll just be trying to sop up all my tears over here...
Inspirationally Red chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
This is simply breathtaking. Your writing style is so vivid and poetic, combining words and metaphors in ways I never would have been able to come up with in a thousand years, each more incredible than the last. The tone was poignant and bittersweet, and your portrayal of Axel was simply exquisite.
... I think I'm in love :P
v chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
re-read in honor of 8/13; this is still my absolute favorite fic of all time, any fandom. the level of ability you achieve here is enviable, is heart-breaking, is astounding. worthy of awe. i miss your writing and, more importantly, i miss you. i hope life is treating you well, old friend.
tempus terere chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
I was afraid to read this piece for a ridiculously long period of time because I knew it would break my heart, and now it has and gosh, I am literally crying like a waterfall as I write this. Still, I'm glad I finally gave in to this story because it is just as beautiful as it is tragic. So yeah, thanks for writing it.
i love you chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Theresalwaysacatch chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Hi. I know a lot of people have said something along these lines already, but I'm actually tearing up right now. The way you write is so evocative; it touches places, dark, quiet places, we all visit but seldom remember. Somehow, these feelings are real...
All of this from a fanfic. Honestly, I'd be the last person to admit it.
On the off chance that you actually still check updates on this account, which I tend to doubt, please tell me if you plan on writing a novel (or if you've already been published. That seems entirely possible). I'll end with that, seeing as I'm incredibly in articulate at the moment (For that, I apologize).

P.S. Do you by any chance like Catch-22? I've read a few of your stories and Heller seems to be an influence somewhere...Just curious. But yeah, like I said, you'll probably never read this. So there's that.
También (una cosa final) - amo que usas español en tus cuentos. Es una lengua hermosa, ¿verdad? Prometo que ya es todo que voy a decir pa' ahora. Hasta luego, Señor. Que sigas escribiendo tan bueno.
Feral Phoenix chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Dang, ouch. I was recommended this story by an author friend, and found it very much worth my time! Your prose is stellar, I love the banter between the characters, and though canon has moved on and invalidated some of the plot points, this is still a lovely story of it-just-sort-of-happened romance between two people who maybe shouldn't have fit together but somehow did, for a little while.
rain angst chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
This story is amazing. I love the attention to detail and it fits with the characters extremely well. I truly enjoyed reading this, great job.
WeDidItForTheDead chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Thank you for breaking my heart {and I do type this in all seriousness. My friends tease me for my addiction towards sgories best labeled tragedies}. It's so surreal reading a story from before 358/2 Days, BBS, or DDD. No Xion, no further explanation; everything's your own interpretation. And you deciohered it wonderfully. You translated it in an even more beautific way. So many aspects of just pure beauty. This will forever be in with my favorite stories. Thank you for taking those three months to write this.
vroom chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
this was so sweet, it made me cry. You are such a great writer.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Purple Shadow Fox chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
I'm at a loss of words towards this. This is truly amazing, and it was wonderful time spent reading.
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