Reviews for Deceitful Above All Things
Bye-Friendos chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
This was an amazingly profound piece, and your style, tone, and the flow of your words were spectacular. The interpretations of the characters were so true...and the buildup to the bittersweet end just made the overall piece more effective. This really hit me hard, and, quite honestly, this made me bloody sad, but I loved it all the same. It's a wonderful fic, and a definite add to my favourites.
Atakai L chapter 1 . 9/19/2007
When I finished this story, my heart was aching. Literally aching. I've never felt so deeply for a story.

No tears. Which is odd for me. But a deep pain in my chest. That, my friend, is definately something.

Emotion, fire, fire, burning, despair, heartbreak, burning, fire, fire. I can feel it all so deeply. Excellent. Excellent.
Epsilon Vega chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
Nope. There really aren't any words that would do this any justice. Simply beatiful.
strange'eagle chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
No. and...Yes.

There are no words for this.

I think at this ending you wanted it to be that way.
coffeeshop chapter 1 . 9/13/2007
Oh my god. Your writing is beautiful-the way you structure your sentences and the way your writing flows together-it leaves me speechless. Every sentence, especially towards the end, was painful to read, yet so amazing and addicting and wonderful. They way you painted images and colors to every emotion was so vividly done-I love the way you brush past some details and then elaborate on others in a way that brings everything in full circle at the end.

And well. None of that made any sense, it was just my thoughts dribbling out of my mouth while I stared slack-jawed at the screen. ...idk. I am doped up on cough medicine, sorry if I make no sense. XD;

But really. I loved this so much, I can't even describe how beautiful your writing is.
iceblitz chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
Normally I lurk-and-leave with fanfics as I am Not The Eloquent when it comes to reviewing, but I just had to crawl out of lurkerdom long enough to mention that I am now in tears and that you are made of Awesome Major Win for creating this fic :P
Claws chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
I snickered when it came to the porn mag. How horribly embarrassing for Roxas. XD; [Xigbar needs to keep his nose out of others' business... but that wouldn't be fun.]

The ending is so sad though... there's regret, yet it's peaceful. [And very romantic.
Canderjack chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
I wish I had the words and the ability to review this story properly. Instead I'll have to settle for saying that it took my breath away.
oddstick chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
Beautiful and tragic, yet there is still hope. Brings tears to my eyes.
ohdearyme chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
such an amazing fic. the best axel/roxas I have read, really. even if this took you three months, I have to say that in my opinion it was totally worth it.
chesauroshin chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
Damn you, for making me cry like that...

This is one of the best Axel/Roxas stories I've ever read, to be perfectly honest. What with the stress balls and the custard and the rocks, and then you had to kill me with the Neruda. Agh.

Seriously though, it was really good, and I really look forward to reading what else you have.
lhbaghead chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Again, I like the progression. Your way with laying out the events is wonderful and keeps the reader entertained liek woah .

I laughed and I smiled sadly and I cheered for them even if I knew the end result. The ending was decidly sad and I felt (in a good way) slightly depressed after it.

This one is a winner .
oceanbent chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Hello there, I'm the spastic tard who reviewed My Girlfriend, Who Lives In Canada with astonishing incoherency. So yes. The first time I've ever reviewed twice in one day. And simply, this was absolutely amazing.

...God. While, I admit, I do lean on the soppy side, I don't usually cry at fics. And well. That made me cry. D: Usually I would try (and fail) to be at least vaguely funny and/or witty but you know. *insert normal adoration rant with added extra of wow, your story robbed me of words* :DD

...I want to stalk you now. D:

And sorry for the complete lack of concrit or even I ADORES JUU, but rest assured. I do. :]
Neiti Kyllikki chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
... Somehow I don't think this review can actually be clever and kind enough to thank you for this wonderful story. But thank you anyway. :) I really enjoyed reading this, it's just... I don't know, I just read it and normally I know that it's a fanfic when I'm reading fanfic, but somehow this was different, I was just reading, and I really enjoyed it. Everything was just so... amazing. o.O I really can't put it in the right words, but I loov this.
Izayoi Aki SDG chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
This was very good!


P.S I added this story to my C2 Archive
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