|Reviews for Mission Gone Right?|
| OverRule chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
Im a perv too ;D
| HinataUzumaki-SakuraUchiha chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
I'm under 15 too also a virgin! It's not being perverted at all :D lemon fanfics are always he best ;)
| dystine branham chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Add another chapter
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Tenten just raped,you cant expect her 'wounds inside her' be good for Neji to 'chew' ,u say shes bleeding right,you cant possibly make her raped, then another mature...how unbrainwashed
| Covetedardent chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Reading your authors note at the end was funny!
| xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Not bad for a virgin. Pretty emotional really
| Dreamer94678 chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
i am more of a pervert than you are...i am only twelve yet i am all ready writing a nejiten lemon so xp!beat that!...and no i am not i whore...still da same virgin i was yesterday...i only want a certain man to touch me...if he ever notices me...but that may never happen...so it is like the real neji and tenten in the episodes...except not the shippudden...maybe...possibly...
| tenten10 chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
lol i understand who isnt now a days though
| ShadowFox95 chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
| Honey Fujioka chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
neh, don't worry about it! i am too... it's all my friend's fault, but hey, what're you going to do? anyways, nice... sad, that tenten got raped, but yay! neji and tenten got back together and gonna get married!
| Shikyo no Amatsu Shinsei chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
when u say under 15, what exactly do u mean?
LOL! i'm a perv as well... i'm under 15 and i also read lemons... i was INFLUENCED! EFFING INFLUENCED by two pervs on my schoolbus. i used to b a total anti-swearing freak who was a goody goody, but thx to them i swear like hell... and i've become a perv... but i'm too scared to let out my age... for fear of being killed by forces on fanfic... :D lol. :D nice story... the rape part was so disgusting, (not that ur story was disgusting, the rape was supposed to come across as disgusting) and i almost died from shock. can u believe that i am so sardonic that i almost laughed?
LOL! anyway, nice story! :D :D :D XD XD XD
| themadanimeotaku chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
That was well done :) good Job, not bad for a 15 year old hehehehe
| catilena1890 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
I understand. Wait until I get my story "The return of Clouds" up. Then talk to me about being a perv lol. I am not 16 yet. vir. and I have read alot of neji/ten lemons. great job on this.
| Mousky chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
short but good!
| EmrieRose chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
Cute! I cried when she was it has a really cut ending.