Reviews for SecondChances
Starlight Quill chapter 2 . 5/13/2016
interesting story
septimushoran chapter 3 . 4/30/2016
WHENS THE NEXT CHAP?
Cyan-kun chapter 3 . 10/14/2015
Red and Mew with Ash, that is pretty rare in one story. Ash sure have Victini's luck, if only catching legendary in game is as easy...
Your story is interesting, please update more.
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 3 . 10/11/2015
If Red has Zapdos, and Green has Moltres, I think it would only be fitting if Articuno decided to be caught by Ash.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
6 YEARS! YOU DON'T UPDATE YOUR STORY WAS 6 YEARS!
julie rig chapter 3 . 6/7/2015
A very marvellous work that shows a wrinkle in the reality of actual Pokémon show however it was better than that I m indeed a big fan of urs for this work u had framed a very good story and I will be on hold to read the next chapter
latiasgal chapter 3 . 3/25/2015
Or maybe a lucario.
latiasgal chapter 3 . 3/25/2015
The mystery egg better be latias or latios.
what no more chapter 3 . 2/26/2015
I like these so continue
Ghoul99 chapter 3 . 11/11/2014
Update please
xBud chapter 2 . 11/4/2014
Wow, Ash is stupider than stupid.
IchiIchi chapter 3 . 9/2/2014
Looking recently at these pokemon stories, and this got me hooked on the first chapter. Just great
B chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
How about red or gold travels with ash
strabimonx chapter 3 . 6/5/2014
Nice
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
U should add in pikachu :)
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