Reviews for TwentyOne
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29
Twenynwan
sarahqureshi124gmail.com chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
this is so far the best fanfic I ve read in past few days...n I admire the writer for the best one.
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D chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
cute!
Antigone11 chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
This is great. I love how nobody acknowledges the fact that they missed Dean's ACTUAL birthday because they were too busy yelling at each other. Seems like a very Winchester thing to do!
Nana56 chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Very nice story! Well done!
NC Girl chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Hi! I enjoyed your story! I do have one constructive criticism, however. You used the word "Dean" a lot- in some places it was in nearly every sentence at least once. It got a little distracting and made the flow a little bit choppy. Maybe just try to break it up a little by using other ways of describing Dean (like "the older sibling..." or "the 21 year old..." or "Sam's brother...") But other than that, I thought the story itself was very good! Thanks for posting this.