|Reviews for Just the Two of Us|
| JustSayingRatedM chapter 2 . 1/11/2013
I love how u worked everything out here... Fuck! I love the whole thing!
| Lad Knight of Spades chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Please update. It's sad to see a story abandoned for three years. I really like this one, too.
| The Unlogic chapter 5 . 10/19/2008
Hey!You really need to update soon!
| Cast chapter 5 . 8/16/2008
I actually like your story alot. Been a fan of JSRF, and I dont think you have Butchered the charichters ... Wich I see many many many people do. *shudder* Any way Wanted to drop by and tell you what amazing writing skils you have here o.o. and GL on everything.
| Arashi Yanagawa chapter 2 . 7/8/2008
Wow... such deep emotion all contained in one chapter.
That is absolutely spectacular that you write this way.
| Arashi Yanagawa chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Chapter one was awesome!
| RogueFreak chapter 5 . 9/21/2007
Omg this story is so good and soo cute please i knw its been like 2 months but updat i really wanna knw what happens _
| Bagatelle chapter 5 . 8/23/2007
Yeah, I definitely think that you should continue this. There was a lot left unsaid, a lot of problems unresolved. I'm glad that Gum and Cube made up and are friends again, but I really do want to see what else you have in store for them.
Anyway, this was a good chapter. Heartwarming, nice, soft. Good job. I do hope that you choose to add more to this, but even if you don't, I like it a lot right now.
| Bagatelle chapter 4 . 8/23/2007
The hockey story was a really nice touch. Good way to bring the stuff they stole back into play.
I liked that this chapter was parallel to the last one, only from Cube's POV...and I like that Cube and Combo bonded. Also, it was good to get a little more detail on the fight scene, even from an outsider's perspective.
I also just want to mention that I love the way you write both Corn and Combo. Combo's a real sweetheart, and I love seeing Corn be responsible.
| Bagatelle chapter 3 . 8/23/2007
GOD, WHAT ASSHOLES! You actually made me hate them D:
Go Gum, kicking their sorry asses...! I'm really liking this angry-insane-troubled Gum. I'm probably going to end up reading the rest of this today, heh...it's even better than I thought it would be.
| Bagatelle chapter 2 . 8/23/2007
;_; poor Cube...I felt really bad for her, I actually got caught up in her internal struggle for a minute there. I hope Gum turns around, for her sake!
I like the fact that they're both so impressed and somewhat intimidated by each other, both mentally and physically. It makes the relationship feel true-to-life: lots of girls are like that with each other.
| Bagatelle chapter 1 . 8/22/2007
Woh I read chapter one!
I'm not feeling too good right now but I really wanted to get at least some of this read today since I promised you I would, and anyway, I AM looking forward to reading the rest of it. Just a little sick right now for some reason. I'll probably go to sleep after I finish this review.
So...yes. I like this so far. I like the fact that Gum felt threatened by Cube and then they became friends...I know that this is a stand-alone but it makes me wonder about the Corn/Cube story that you're writing: if/when Corn and Cube get together, will Gum get mad over that? Will she feel threatened again? I'm excited to find out if you'll make that connection.
I was impressed by all of the things that they stole, and I laughed when Gum said that they might consider pinning it all on Clutch if it was all ever discovered. Poor Clutch. XD
I like the idea of Cube and Gum being a wild and crazy pair of femme fatales, yet still really good friends. This is cute so far and I'm definitely psyched to read the rest of it.
| shickystyle chapter 4 . 7/21/2007
Well if it means anything, I think you're doing a damn good job giving this story substance and not rushing things to get to the sex. Anyway, I'm glad they won't have to go through much more self inflicted drama.
| Archai chapter 3 . 7/12/2007
Damn! You sure as hell don't want to piss Gum off.
| shickystyle chapter 2 . 7/7/2007
Oh. Wow. Noh, this is so well done and real, I kinda want to smack you for the ending, that's how much feeling this fic has made me feel(don't get a big head, I'm kinda a sap ;P). I can't though, because it is very realistic and once again I love the way you choose to write these char. Can't wait for more.