Reviews for Intentions
Golden Silver Kelina chapter 4 . 12/24/2012
Asshole!i just happen to be tokiko's older sister and trust it gets messy when someone messes with me
NeoLegend chapter 6 . 5/16/2010
It was an awesome fic, if i were you i would consider a small sequel as well
caseyedith chapter 5 . 4/4/2010
A few touches in this one that I loved: "weasel boy" (classic...I didn't see that one coming! I'm so glad you put it in there!); "You weren't brought here to be eaten...oh wait you were!" ((modified quote...) lol, clever insight); having Yatsume Mumyoi as the homunculus (he makes an excellent homunculus!)

This is a really great idea...
caseyedith chapter 4 . 4/4/2010
lol! Nice RK reference!
caseyedith chapter 3 . 4/4/2010
Really nice. I wish I knew where the fireplace scene came from :).
caseyedith chapter 2 . 4/4/2010
Oh dear... Stubborn old wolf. But again, the golden eyes match! Awesome!

Poor Tokiko...
caseyedith chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
aw,cute, great idea! Making their parents Rurouni Kenshin people is awesome. You also picked great parent-offspring pairs, and I love how you write Kazuki and Tokiko together. They are one of my favorite couples!
Link Fangirl01 chapter 6 . 2/3/2009
Really good fic, melikes. :D You did a great job of twisting RuroKen in, veddy nice.

I love Aoshi's Buso Renkin, that was clever.
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
oh that's great. I really shouldn't be surprised that Saito's her dad.

I can see Misao being Kazuki and Mahiro's mother, I really can. And they have such a stern daddy too. -rocks back and forth giggling-

I honestly thought it was gonna be Kenshin and Kaoru, but Misao and Aoshi are good too.

oh there's more chapters after this...huh. Oh well! I'll just have to review the last chapter when I come to it.

shutting up now...
Withdrawn chapter 6 . 8/20/2008
Right, before I get to the praising, I have to whine. I'm sorry. It's what I do. While I did/do/whatever like this, there are a few problems. Essentially, it's rushed. You didn't give a lot of detail, the transitions were rather sudden, and the main focus throughout seemed simply to move on to the next scene. Still, the concept is brilliant, as is your use of and multitudes of references to RuroKen. Plus it feels rather like an almost passing of the flame from Watsuki's first (as far as I as a Watsuki reader am aware/concerned) big series to his second big series. Plus after you pointed it out I can totally see Misao in Kazuki and Mahiro, and I can definitely see Saito in Tokiko. There are a few plotholes, such as why the Alchemist Army would apparently assume that Tokiko was an orphan instead of doing a background check as I assume they did in the actual series, but still. The concept was brilliant, the characters were amusing at times and perfectly dramatic at others. I really liked it.
nemo1986 chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
In my opinion this story is of rather poor quailty. Tokiko is too OOC and these chapters are more scenes then chapters. In all honestly it has potential but your writing of it ruined it.
Misty Narumi chapter 6 . 12/29/2007
aww...its over

good story...(nods)

lol at Saito's call at the end
W. Jester chapter 2 . 12/22/2007
Very good, nice story and seamless crossover, keep it up!
Kamen Disguise chapter 3 . 11/26/2007
cute. is that it? and i'm gonna give the kudos points a shot here...

CCS?

and, uh, one comment... i thought Tokiko's last name was "Tsumade" or something.
RKgirl93 chapter 3 . 9/9/2007
I L-O-V-E it! :]

Please update soon!

It's fantasic!
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