Reviews for Misappropriation of Lives |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think that this was a really deep fic and I'm glad it was written :) . Felt a little rushed at the end, but all in all a good read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanted to say how much I LOVED this. What a brilliant story- loved the plot and the team moments but adored how you portrayed Daniel's and Vala feelings and changing relationship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice story. A great idea, too. I have already shared it with my friend. Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing a story that fits with the characters of SG-1 and continues the story of Vala and Daniel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have been too busy clicking "next" to give a review but I have to tell you I am really enjoying this. It looks like to have not written for SG-1 in years, and maybe it has been almost that long since you watched the episodes, but I have recently re-watched the entire series. I was looking forward to series 9 & 10 because of Vala, but I was soon reminded of how we really did not get enough of Daniel and Vala. Even during the two years when Claudia Black was supposed to be a regular, Michael and Claudia seemed to be on separate schedules. Half the episodes, it seemed, were missing one of the actors. There were so many stories that could have been told if they could have been on screen together more often, like the one that you are writing here. I even think that the show would have been renewed if we had seen a lot more of the Daniel / Vala potential. So the bottom line is, thanks for writing a quality story for them. Now.. back to my reading :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story but at times I wanted to cry for Vala's pain. You are an incredible writer and I look forward to reading more of your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful story. You've managed to dig into the deeper issues that we all know lie within Vala through this nightmarish scenario. Thank you for not shying away from the kind of angst and damage that would result from such an experience, because that would do a great disservice to Vala's development as a character. You've done such a spectacular job with her characterization. And Daniel...what can I say about Daniel? He's so wonderful with her, and I love how his feelings come out little by little. The scene with him killing Qetesh was extremely powerful because of what it meant to him and Vala. The wee bits of fluff are very satisfying, too! |
![]() ![]() I loved it...I really, really loved it. Warm and funny and heartbreaking, all at once. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, so I'm three years late to the party but I just need to say this: This fic is f*cking fabulous. I loved every single minute of it. It made me cry adn smile and laugh and just...wow. You got the characters just right, and when you were describing the symbiote/host relationship...well let me just say, it's the best, most informative piece of fic I've read about that. It was totally amazing. Great job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story Milena, Another reason to stay up till all hours of the night! So, I think I should just go back and start to read it again just for the pleasure of reading! Thank you! Space x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I love it when I stumble back upon one of your little jewels after searching for good Vala fics out there and being let down. You peg the characters perfectly and the plot is just superb! I could totally see the Tok'ra putting goa'uld symbiotes in some sort of stasis to use later for info and have that bite them in the ass. In short, awesome job and bring on more fics with Vala! (team fics where she is featured are fine too!) |
![]() ![]() WOW what a fantastic story, you kept me gripped all the way throught. Poor Vala, she really went throught it. well done that was a very beatuifully written story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, poor Vala, she's been through so much! At least she had a happy ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Cara, I'm finally here to review. First, I've gotta say I so love Epilogue, it gave the feeling that everything indeed is going to be okay. It was just perfect for the ending of this amazing stroy. Not fluffy, or unrealistic light-hearted. Because I don't think it would have suited to the whole story. It was a dark piece from the start so I'm more than glad that you didn't fall for a hiper-uber-happy-all-is-well ending. "I'm getting there." was a perfect last line. “Daniel, you have no instinct for the dramatic flair.” Hehhe, I so loved that line. Your Jack like always got the big prize for this line even if he was just kinda a special guest in this chap. But he is very right, Daniel had no concept of dramatic effect even though he was the one who came up with the idea:) The last chapter was great, and Vala finally had her long expected nerveous breakdown. I'm glad that she didn't spill the beans out at first, because I don't think it would have been realistic either for Vala's character. She is one of devoted supporters of the 'Denial is our friend' club. But I really understand her, I couldn't do it either, and frankly who could? The scene with the mother and child was done very well, I was expecting a thing like that since the fair thing came in the eariler chapter. All of its good intention, it wasn't a good plan:)The scenes at begining, Daniel's fear, and desperate need to help her were done very well too and made me almost cry. I just loved this chapter too, Milena. It was kinda sad for us to read the last chapter, even if I read a long time was an amazing ride, and I can't thank you enough for this amazing story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I bow to the greatness of this story. Even though Quetesh was an utter bitc* I'm glad you brought her in to pave the way for this. Ever chapter was perfectly written, and you had Jacob, which in of itself makes the story even awesomer. Moments that killed: Vala telling Quetesh to kill the boys. Wow. To make that decision - it both shows how much Vala cares and still how strong she is. Also the "You can't love. I forbid you." scene/fight. Again, wow. And she lied! Quetesh and/or Vala. Because it could easily be taken that Vala lied to push Daniel away, thinking he would. I dunno my mind went circular at that bit. This was such a good fic. |