Reviews for The Second Date
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2016
Not bad. You could probably make a full-length story revolving around this, if you wanted.
Burke23 chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
It was great, don't be so hard on yourself.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
write an entire fucking story around that
you fucking have to! ! ! ! ! !
jeanette9a chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
nice! are you going to write more or is this it?
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Great story. I hate Paulina, but like her in this fic.
nobodiez chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
i gotta say, i'm impress, i more of a dannyXjune or dannyXember fan, but you made kinda like danny paulina, you did an outstanding job of making less like a snob and more of a likeable person
Tristar chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Do you actually like Danny and Paulina being together?
Garnet Sky chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
You did an excellent job with Paulina.
Christina chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
Nice story! It's like Paulina had seen another side of Danny Fenton/Phantom...
AbsintheSpoons chapter 1 . 7/28/2007
This fic is so cute. It makes me want to go write a fic with Paulina in it. She doesn't get enough love. :D
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Not bad; Paulina even realized how likable Danny really is.

Keep the good writing.
Writer's-BlockDP chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Very interesting plot. Not the first time Paulina has gone out with Danny due to ulterior motives, but the first time she's been pulled off in this way. I liked it. I do think she is at least somewhat deeper than the show lets on; kind of like Legally Blonde, would be the best way to describe it. Not the brightest bulb in the box, but not altogether terrible either.
AcousticMaiden chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Hm, very interesting. A fic including Paulina where in Paulina isn't a "shallow little witch". She actually seemed like a real person, if not a bit self centered, while still maintaining that attitude that makes her in character. Good job!