Reviews for For His Happiness
AC2 chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
This is very good. I like the way you explain the coming about of the wedding of Finwe and Indis, despite Feanor's reservations. You write Feanor very well, my dear.

That second chapter would fit very well with this. How about a bit about the birth of his first step-brother? I can see the sibling rivalry already... Please?
Ellfine chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Very interesting story. I would so be having second thoughts if I were Indis after Finwe tried to call off the wedding just because Feanor was having a jealous tantrum. However, she is good and kind and giving and deeply loving, so she took Finwe as she could have him. It is indeed a pity that Finwe never realized in life the problems he allowed Feanor to cause. Perhaps in Mandos Finwe found his healing. Poor Indis though.

Nicely done.