|Reviews for Under New Management|
| Janna Silver Hawkins chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Now this...this is what should have happened! I love it :D
| ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
A great story. Very good.
| CrossoverAUman chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Have the monkey stab the heart.
| Allronix chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
When I'd saw three, I figured that Jack would take to the Duchman in the end. Always on the seas, always a Captain of the fastest ship, and always a pirate. Land once every decade? When you're Captain Jack Sparrow, what would it matter?
Thank you. This is how I pictured that movie ending.
| Numbuh296 chapter 1 . 10/17/2007
A great story. I liked how you gave insights into several characters minds. I, for one, would like to see more stabbings of the heart. Like Barbossa, or Marty.
| Sephy-Noir chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Wow that was exelent. It's true that Jack would never be able to cut out his own heart.
I loved it.
Captain Jana Sparrow
| PoweroftheWol chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
A long string of Davy Jones abuse (kidding).
Well I'm in ful agreement that this a simply marvellous oneshot in it's own right, it would be a crime not to be able to see where else you could take the "What if someone else stabbed Jones' heart" and with who.
So please. Continue. :D
| Azura Rey chapter 1 . 6/27/2007
I want to see others take a crack simply because this was so awesome! Please write more!
| oh-you-pretty-things chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
This is great, just marvellous and wonderful. :) I would love to see how you do the other chapters, but you are right...it does make a stunning oneshot. Either way, it's wonderful. ;)
| bluegoldrose chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
I think it would be interesting to see more characters stab the heart. This was an excellent one shot, (really, it was), but others would be fun too.
Jack would be a very interesting undead person. lol :)
| MartiOwlsten chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Yay! I like THIS ending better than the actual one... hee. Oh, so very fun! Loved Jack - you did so well on Jack. I think Nuts got you going on it, nice and Jacked-up, so you could totally do this with ease.
Love the line about doing it quickly. Very like Jack.
Fluff! Oh, I shall have you giving readers toothaches in no time!
And... I love the last line. Jack has the BEST play on words! You capture his essence beautifully!
| Captain Sarah Sparrow chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
Chills... I got chills. Very nice.
"...the little animal set his tiny paws against the wheel and pushed with all his infinitesimal might." Hehe, I can so see that.
| Rokhal chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Really, really good. This one punches you in the gut a bit.
I think continuing the series would be a great idea, since you write the characters very well, and you can combine horror and humor. Bravo.
| razzledazzle41191 chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
Oneshot is great, but having other people stab the heart would be really cool too, I don't think I've seen anyone but Will or Jack stab the heart in fanfiction.