Reviews for Take It or Leave It
kazuyaryo chapter 14 . 2/18
A great story.
The Infinite Sight chapter 14 . 3/21/2022
My heart, damn i don’t know what to say. First of all, thank you for the story. The end with Kakuzu was like a huge bomb and my brain explosed but i really enjoyed this story. It was sad but i liked it. Thank you again.
LadyChisana chapter 14 . 4/11/2021
I was just searching for a light read before going to bed, and I stumbled opon this. Thought it's going to be a cute, fluffy story...
I was literally gaping when reading Chapter 13 and 14. What a twist. I had to scroll up to make sure this is in the "Humor/Romance" genre.
Chapter 13 was really something. I could feel all of Sakura's emotions like shock, fear, despair, disgust, resignation. It makes me want to vomit what that person does to her. Good thing he's dead. You may want to put trigger warning in thic chapter, though. I think those who have gone through something similar might not be prepared for what Ch.13 has in store.
Chapter 14 was kind of a sweet but realistic, and I loved it.
I do realize I'm about a decade late, but I still want to comment haha
abenay chapter 1 . 2/11/2021
oh wow!
mykaelamatsukaze chapter 14 . 1/5/2021
So Zetsu won all the way hahahaha
read-n-review chapter 14 . 6/2/2020
Ahhh. I read all 14 chapters in 2 days. I barely slept and read at work because I needed to know what happened. I have to say, Chapter 13 really got me. I almost stopped reading I was so upset at the twist, but I pulled myself together and finished. My, my, my. I never considered the two as a pair, but by golly, the two of you made it work.

Now. Please, please, please. Find a way to write more fics with other Akatsuki pairings with Sakura? Even if they're short, juicy lemons? By God, I'd bend to your wills. I'd trade for fanart! Anything! Such good prose, authors. Bravo on a story well done!

Yours Truly,
read-n-review (v.)
It's what I do.
mareleo chapter 14 . 5/30/2020
Ah! So sweet and I only wish we got a final steamy scene between them as closure! This was a good read and definitely took me be surprise. The writing and plot grew more intense with each chapter.
mareleo chapter 12 . 5/30/2020
why am I crying? these goodbyes and sudden disappearances are wrecking me!
mareleo chapter 9 . 5/29/2020
I like her and Zetsu but I find myself slowly leaning towards Kakuzu surprisingly
Anon chapter 14 . 5/7/2020
This fic cured my depression and then gave it back lol I rlly liked the idea of them being kittens :( it sucks so hard that it had to be a whole scheme... and that he pretty much just raped her and Hidan died... like man I have such a soft spot for Hidan, I think the fact that he was killed hurt me the most. Anyway, this fic was masterfully some, as sad as I was at the end, it was rlly nice to read overall... please if you ever do a similar concept please let it be a real harem with non rapist Akatsuki members
iamkur chapter 14 . 3/12/2020
yes!yes! yes! only a sentence in on the story and i was already with hopes of a better ending. i thought it would have been dark dark.. :O

i'm so thankful bout the ending! you might not see this anymore, but nonetheless, i want to just comment for people that might be wanting to read.

glad she ends up with him. you can't imagine how i was so anti the other guy when it seemed like it was going that direction.. grr grr..
but yeah, just two things the. the little slip of note (which i hope she burns) and hidan

aaah, but this is so good. i remember reading this before but i paused thinking it was just a crack fic, but man! thanks for this, you're awesome (if you ever get to read this)
iamkur chapter 13 . 3/12/2020
man, talk about plot twist! :D

i feel sad for hidan.. waaa
elite-handcuffs chapter 14 . 2/23/2020
All the elaborate fluff and 'harem' for a feast full of mindfuck and twist. I LIKE.
ThatPageantGirl chapter 14 . 2/22/2020
This...was not at all what I was expecting, but I became completely engrossed in this story. It took over every bit of free time I had, what with going back to re-read sections and asking myself "Did that really just happen?" and "Did they really just say that?" I loved the comedy, the drama, the sexual tension and the budding romances, along with that underlying mystery as to how and why the Akatsuki wound up as kittens on Sakura's doorstep. Can I also mention that I LOVE that you didn't make Itachi a love intrest? Don't get me wrong, I love the guy, it's just not very realistic to have Sakura migrate to the very reason that her first love went awol in the first place (as is so often the case in alot of post-massacre fics). In Akatsuki fics in general it's rare that Sakura isn't paired with him, but I digress. I honestly thought that this all was just a big ol' loyalty test concocted by Tsunade to see if she was right to leave Konoha in Sakura's hands as an interim Hokage while Naruto was being prepared to take the helm (I have a VERY active imagination, you see). I never imagined that the plot would play out the way it did. I became so invested in Sakura's individual relationships with the guys that I found myself cheering on every subtle (or not so subtle) shift towards a potential couple. I couldn't believe that half of them were puppets. I'm still in shock over that, and the fact that Kakazu played Sakura like a fiddle from the start. The personalities were so believable, their dialogue so spot on, who knows how long the rouse could have gone on for. The burning questions in my mind though: What was Tobi intending to do to Sakura that last night at her house when he was walking toward her in the hallway? And did Kakazu really kill Hidan out of jealousy? I was really hoping that everyone's favorite Jashinist would just pop up alive and well at the end, and he and Zetsu would decide to share Sakura, but no such luck : '( Gosh, I miss Hidan's crazy ass. I totally thought Sakura would just say fuck it and then fuck him. And Zetsu. Maybe simultaneously. And was Tobi really starting to have feelings for her too? Because that could work :D Sorry, my eyes are bigger than my futon. A lot of fun to be had on a big, empty property :D And how dare Kakazu go through all of that trouble and then completely suck as a lover? I'd have had to kill him three times over just for that. Selfish bastard. Hopefully Zetsu can erase that horrible moment for Sakura in time. I'm sure that would be a great read too :)
ThatPageantGirl chapter 1 . 2/14/2020
Definitely a unique concept :)
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